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Florence Kaslow

Florence Kaslow PhD (1952) is a renowned American psychotherapist. In addition to studying and instructing Psychotherapy she also practices. She served as the 43th president of the Div.(Society for Family Psychology), Div. 46 (Media Psychology and Technology) and co-chair of APA's committee on International Relations in Psychology. She also served as a division president in 1987, and is a chair of the Family Psychology Specialty Council, which helps to boost membership and establish research as an important component of the division. (talk) 18:07, 4 April 2018 (UTC)

She has influenced the field for decades, specifically in family psychology. She helped found and was the first president of American Board of Forensic Psychology. Her contributions to psychology are numerous, as she has helped to found several other groups such as; the American Board of Forensic psychology, APA Division of Family Psychology, American board of family psychology, International Family Therapy Association. BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 03:42, 21 April 2018 (UTC) She earned a Ph.D in psychology and spent years teaching graduate students and medical school courses in clinical, couple and family, and forensic psychology.BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 18:07, 27 April 2018 (UTC)Sabimana.claude (talk) 18:59, 29 April 2018 (UTC) Wyatt Becker (talk) 17:45, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Life and career

Early life and education

Florence Kaslow is a American-born psychotherapist. Kaslow the daughter of Irving and Rose, who emigrated to the united states as children, served as a huge influence in her life as she learned of the poor treatment of individuals based on nationality or religion. Specifically in respect to her treatment of people from other parts of the world and her desire to explore, educate, and help people from all corners of the world. She has also described the start of her interest in psychology of people and families dynamic began during early childhood due to being a part of such a large extended family. BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 18:27, 27 April 2018 (UTC) Wyatt Becker (talk) 17:45, 1 May 2018 (UTC)Sabimana.claude (talk) 04:58, 10 May 2018 (UTC)

She has recieved degrees from many Universities, including Temple (Bachelors degree), Bryn Mawr (Masters degree), and Ohio State (Doctorate degree). During college she started volunteering to work in several international student resources such as counseling and peer mentoring, she continued this throughout her educational career.18:38, 29 April 2018 (UTC)BCFneuropsychndsu (talk)

During her career she has held several prestigous positions, she currently practices and writes about psychotherapy. She has had an influence in the field of family psychology, as she has been apart of it for many years and written many documents and article directly appplying to her family therapy. During her time at Hahnneman University, she was a professor and advised international students. She was the initial dean of one of the first combination Ph.D and J.D program at Hahnemann University.BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 18:35, 29 April 2018 (UTC)(talk) 18:35, 4 April 2018 (UTC)

She served as the division president in 1987, and is a chair of the Family Psychology Specialty Council, which helps to boost membership and establish research as an important component of the division. She earned her Ph.D in Psychology and spent years teaching graduate students and medical school courses in clinical, couple and family, and forensic psychology.BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 18:07, 27 April 2018 (UTC)(talk) 18:35, 4 April 2018

She has published twenty-six books and one-hundred and eighty articles on psychotherapy.BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 18:39, 29 April 2018 (UTC) Comprehensive Handbook of Psychotherapy; family therapy;

prison psych ethics;

(talk) 18:35, 4 April 2018 BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 01:25, 20 March 2018 (UTC)

Contributions To Psychology

Florence kaslow has been tremendous force for the initiation and development of family therapy across the globe. She has remained an active practitioner, author and instructor in various topics in psychotherapy . She has traveled around the world teaching, lecturing and promoting international family therapy cooperation. Additionally she has been awarded a variety of honors, including the American Psychological Association's Distinguished Contribution to Applied Psychology in 1990. Kaslow has gone far beyond simply traveling to distant lands and demonstrating her own particular treatment orientation, and essentially advocating and demonstrating her own approach. In addition, she also inspired her daughter Nadine Kaslow to become a psychologist and receive the Distinguished Contribution Award to Family Psychology. Sabimana.claude (talk) 17:59, 23 April 2018 (UTC) BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 18:14, 27 April 2018 (UTC)

References

• Miller, A. (n.d.). All in the family. PsycEXTRA Dataset. doi:10.1037/e573082014-023
• CHAMBERLIN, J. (n.d.). Like mother, like daughter. Retrieved March 22, 2018, from http://www.apa.org/monitor/jan01/kaslow.aspx
• FLORENCE KASLOW, Ph.D., A.B.P.P. (n.d.). Retrieved March 22, 2018, from https://www.executiveadvisors.org/florence-kaslow-phd-abpp

Dr. Council's comments: This is starting to become acceptable, but it is very brief. Since Kaslow was president of the APA media psychology division, you should at least mention her work in that area. Other comments:

1. You need to learn how to do reference citations appropriately for Wikipedia
2. I see where Sabimana has signed. By looking at the history, I could see that Britney and Wyatt both worked on this. You need to be sure to sign your work to get credit.

J.R. Council (talk) 17:11, 25 April 2018 (UTC)

Dr. Council's comments:

1. You still need to learn how to do reference citations appropriately for Wikipedia
2. Proofread carefully. There several words, including on in a section head, which need to be capitalized
3. Section titled career is choppy
4. I'm sending the link to Ian, but you can be working on these things while we wait to hear back from him

J.R. Council (talk) 19:36, 2 May 2018 (UTC)

Assignment 7

Florence Kaslow is a renowned American psychotherapist. She has influenced the field for decades, specifically in family psychology. She helped found and was the first president of American Board of Forensic Psychology. Her contributions to psychology are numerous, as she has helped to found several other groups such as; the American Board of Forensic psychology, APA Division of Family Psychology, American board of family psychology, International Family Therapy Association.BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 03:42, 21 April 2018 (UTC)

During her career she has held several prestigous positions. Florence Kaslow currently practices and writes about psychotherapy. She has had an influence in the field of family psychology, as she has been apart of it for many years. During her time at Hahnneman University, she was a professor and advised international students. She was asked to be the dean of one of the first Ph.D and J.D program at Hahnemann University.
She has recieved degrees from many Universities, including Temple (Bachelors degree), Bryn Mawr (Masters degree), and Ohio State (Doctorate degree). She has published twenty-six books and one-hundred and eighty articles on psychotherapy. BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 03:42, 21 April 2018 (UTC)

BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 04:46, 8 April 2018 (UTC) Wyatt Becker (talk) 04:03, 9 April 2018 (UTC)Sabimana.claude (talk) 17:28, 23 April 2018 (UTC)

Dr. Council's comments:

• This is good, but you still need to work on it. Bold her name at the beginning, and provide her date of birth at the beginning.
• Start off by staing why she is notable. Be specific! As it is, the second sentence is vague and does not need to mention her early life and family. Save childhood, family and early education for the main text. I.e., HOW has she influenced family psychlogy, etc.
• Back up your statements with reference citations.
• Link to other articles, e.g., on universities and psychotherapy, as appropriate.
• Sabimana has not signed. Did he contribute? J.R. Council (talk) 16:21, 11 April 2018 (UTC)

Not ready yet. J.R. Council (talk) 22:03, 11 April 2018 (UTC)

Dr. Council's final feedback on Assn. 7

I can't see where you've done any of the things I suggested. If you want full credit for this and later assignments, you need to finish up the lead and start drafting out the main text of the article. Use material edited out of the lead in the main text. J.R. Council (talk) 19:31, 20 April 2018 (UTC) BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 03:39, 21 April 2018 (UTC)

Lead Section Britney Banning

 Florence Kaslow is a renowned American psychotherapist. Her interest in helping and understanding people started from a very young age, she had a large extended family that was very close. Her parents immigrated here as small children, education was very important and was a strong focus in her childhood. She attended several colleges and earned a bachelor degree from temple university, a masters from Bryn Mawr University, and eventually a doctorates from Ohio State University, all while getting married and starting a family.
 During her career she has had several positions. Florence Kaslow has practiced psychotherapy, taught as a professor at Hahnneman University, and advised international students. She was also the head of the first Ph.D and J.D program at Hahnemann University.
  She has published twenty-six books and one-hundred and eighty articles on psychotherapy. She has influenced the field for decades specifically in family psychology. She helped found and was the first president of American Board of Forensic Psychology. Her contributions to psychology are numerous, as she has helped to found several other groups such as; the American Board of Forensic psychology, APA Division of Family Psychology, American board of family psychology, International Family Therapy Association.

Dr. Council's comments: First of all, don't indent your first line. It puts all the text in a gray box. Learn some simple formatting commands. Look in Bb Wikipedia Resources page for help. Other comments:

• Put details of upbringing and family life in text of main article.

Ditto for undergrad education and less notable aspects of education and career

• Focus on notable accomplishments in lead.

J.R. Council (talk) 04:21, 6 April 2018 (UTC)

Clean this up following suggestions above and it can be the basis of your best lead for Assignment 7. J.R. Council (talk) 04:46, 6 April 2018 (UTC)

Claude' s comment:Hey Guys look over what we have so far and start to add some paragraph and sentences to come up with three paragraphs.Sabimana.claude (talk) 02:16, 8 April 2018 (UTC)

BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 02:14, 26 March 2018 (UTC)

Hey Britney, I left your feedback on your talk page. Wyatt Becker (talk) 19:34, 3 April 2018 (UTC)

• Feedback on this lead should be in the sandbox for this page. J.R. Council (talk) 04:26, 6 April 2018 (UTC)

Lead Section Wyatt Becker

Florence Kaslow is an American Psychotherapist. She has taught as a professor at Hahnneman University, and published many works including 26 books and 180 articles. Not only has she written many works, she help start psychology groups, such as the American Board of Forensic Psychology, APA Division of Family Psychology, American board of family psychology, and the International Family Therapy Association. She has had an influence in the field of family psychology, as she has been apart of it for many years. She has recieved degrees from many Universities, including Temple (Bachelors degree), Bryn Mawr (Masters degree), and Ohio State (Doctorate degree).

  Florence is the mother of Nadine Kaslow, another American Psychologist. 

Wyatt Becker (talk) 03:21, 28 March 2018 (UTC)

• Point worth noting, but in main text of article. Again, don't indent first line. Learn simple formatting commands. J.R. Council (talk) 04:34, 6 April 2018 (UTC)

feedback for Wyatt Becker This could be a good lead section, it is concise and to the point, I do however think it may be slightly too short. you mention some of the notable things about her but not why they are notable, or with enough descriptive detail. the only notable topic in the beginning is the amount of books she wrote. I think it should definitely start of with her general profession, but should also specify her importance or relevance to the field. there were a few spelling or tense errors but mostly not a big deal, except I noticed you spelled her name wrong several times, it is spelled Florence. BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 02:41, 28 March 2018 (UTC)

feedback for Wyatt Becker Sabimana.claude (talk) 20:46, 7 April 2018 (UTC)Good work so far. The information you wrote is very clear and have good start but you need to add more information about what influenced her to become psychologist.Sabimana.claude (talk) 02:16, 8 April 2018 (UTC)

• Feedback for Sabimana Claude - learn how to sign your work. J.R. Council (talk) 04:40, 6 April 2018 (UTC)

Dr. Council's comments: This lead is choppy and vague. Spelling and grammatical errors. Proofread your work! J.R. Council (talk) 04:40, 6 April 2018 (UTC)

lead section Claude Sabimana

Florence Kaslow, a daughter of Irving and Rose, served as a division president in 1987, and is a chair of the Family Psychology Specialty Council who help to boost membership and establish research as an important component of the division. And she also earned Ph.D in psychology and spend years teach graduate students and medical school courses in clinical, couple and family, and forensic psychology. Florence W kaslow has been Tremendous force for the initiation and development of family therapy across the global. Besides she is remaining an active practitioner,editor and teacher. She has traveled around the world teaching ,lecturing and promoting international family therapy cooperation and collegiality. Moreover she has been awarded a variety of honors, which some of them my include the American Psychological Association 's Distinguished Contribution to Applied Psychology in 1990. Kaslow has gone far beyond simply traveling to distant lands and demonstrating her own particular treatment orientation,beyond essentially advocating and demonstrating her own approach. On other hand, she has focused on the needs of people and families in dealing with their problems and the needs and understanding of professional' some of them may include encouraging colleagues from others places so that they can share what they know and practice with others. Florence is a writer. One of her many books may include International Book of Family Therapy (1982) and together through thick and thin( Sharlin, kaslow, & Hummaerschmidit, 2001) On her personal note, she first became acquired with Florrie more than a quarter century ago when she succeeded her as editor of what in now the journal of marital and family therapy. She worked closely with on the international family therapy as association( IFTA)Sabimana.claude (talk) 02:19, 8 April 2018 (UTC)

feedback for claude Sabimana this is all true but is maybe too short. there are a few grammatical errors, but this is something i think we can all work on as a group. I believe earlier you expressed interest specifically in her personal life such as friends and family, were you able to find more on this? I think this is a good start but can definitely be expanded upon to include more on why she is renowned in her field or relevant to the history of psychology( even though she is still alive)BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 05:12, 29 March 2018 (UTC)

Feedback This is a good start, though it may be to short. It includes good detaials that we shouldinclude, but it wil need some adding to, so that it includes more information about her. Wyatt Becker (talk) 19:33, 3 April 2018 (UTC)

Dr. Council's comments: Poor grammar and syntax. Fails to focus on notable accomplishments. J.R. Council (talk) 04:43, 6 April 2018 (UTC)

Claude' s comment I am going to add more information as you requested guysSabimana.claude (talk) 01:05, 8 April 2018 (UTC)

Assignment 5

BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 00:11, 20 March 2018 (UTC)

Dr. Council's comments on Assn 5, above

1. I can't tell who did this because it is not signed.
2. These are good additions, but need to be combined with the other Assignment 5 work, below. J.R. Council (talk) 17:43, 28 March 2018 (UTC)

To do list

• Sabimana.claude (talk) 20:34, 28 March 2018 (UTC) Florence Kaslow's picture
• Early life
• Education
• Career
• Contributions to psychology
• Published Works
• Personal life

BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 00:30, 20 March 2018 (UTC) Hey Guys I dont see any outlines yet so i am going to post mine here. I will assign us all tasks as wellBCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 00:16, 20 March 2018 (UTC) BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 00:08, 20 March 2018 (UTC)

Outline

A.Early life₁

• Parents: Irving and rose
• Birth Place
• Siblings :Sister Cecelia
• Early Education: Considered very important culturally
• becoming the confidant of friends, family and neighbors

BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) :44, 20 March 2018 (UTC)

B. Education₁

• temple University
• Ohio State University
• Bryn Mawr university

BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 00:35, 20 March 2018 (UTC)

C. Career₁

• international student counseling
• Hahnemann University Professor
• head of PhD/J.D program for Villanova law school and Hahnemann.

BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 01:25, 20 March 2018 (UTC)

D. Contributions₁

• American Board of Forensic psychology
• 1st president of American Board of Forensic psychology
• APA division of Family Psychology
• American board of family psychology
• International family therapy association
• Holocaust dialogue meeting

BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 01:25, 20 March 2018 (UTC)

E. Published articles/books₁

• 26 books & 180 published articles
• Comprehensive Handbook of Psychotherapy
• family therapy
• prison psych ethics

BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 01:25, 20 March 2018 (UTC)

F. Personal life₁

• husband Sol
• children Howard and Nadine

BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 01:25, 20 March 2018 (UTC)

• Sabimana.claude (talk) 21:01, 28 March 2018 (UTC)Influenced her daughter and became APA president 2014

G. Additional references

Florence W. Kaslow (2010) The seventh holocaust dialogue meeting: Porto Alegre, Brazil, The American Journal of Family Therapy, 31:3, 215-227, DOI: 10.1080/01926180390167160

Florence W. Kaslow (2010) A Family Therapy Narrative, The American Journal of Family Therapy, 38:1, 50-62, DOI: 10.1080/01926180903430030

BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 01:40, 20 March 2018 (UTC)

Florence W. Kaslow (1980) Ethical Problems in Prison Psychology Criminal Justice and Behavior, v.7, 3-9, http://journals.sagepub.com/doi/abs/10.1177/009385488000700101

BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 01:53, 20 March 2018 (UTC)

Sabimana.claude (talk) 20:13, 28 March 2018 (UTC)CHAMBERLIN, J. (n.d.). Like mother, like daughter. Retrieved March 22, 2018, from http://www.apa.org/monitor/jan01/kaslow.aspx

Sabimana.claude (talk) 20:28, 28 March 2018 (UTC)FLORENCE KASLOW, Ph.D., A.B.P.P. (n.d.). Retrieved March 22, 2018, from https://www.executiveadvisors.org/florence-kaslow-phd-abpp

Sabimana.claude (talk) 17:50, 21 March 2018 (UTC) to do list I need to find more information of her early life, education and what influenced her to be a psychologist. and I need more information about her marriage, children, friends and academic career. did you mean for this to be your outline↑ or the one below ↓ because the one below is blank?? Sabimana.claude ^^?BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 01:58, 22 March 2018 (UTC)

Claude - you told me you did an outline but I can't see it. Please follow Britney's suggestions for formatting to-do list and outline. J.R. Council (talk) 19:42, 28 March 2018 (UTC)

Outline

BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 02:31, 22 March 2018 (UTC)

how to format this like an outline:

1. go to edit source
2. there is a box with the word heading and a triangle, click on the triangle select level 2
3. then type in between the == == to do list will look like this> ==to do list==
4. then hit enter
5. copy your first item (early life) and move it to below to do list
6. highlight (early life)
7. to the right of heading after format, click on the columns an asterisk should appear in front of early life

should look like this * early life

1. enter again
2. copy your second item (education) and move it to below early life
3. highlight (education)
4. click on the columns again
5. enter again
6. copy your third item (influences) and move it to below education
7. highlight (influences)
8. click on the columns again
9. enter again now do the same thing for the rest of your to do list.

it should look like this below ↓↓↓↓↓ I am not sure if he is requiring us to do our todo list like this or not but this is also how we will format the page.===Dr. Council's comments on Assn 5, above===

1. I can't tell who did this because it is not signed.
2. These are good additions, but need to be combined with the other Assignment 5 work, below. J.R. Council (talk) 17:43, 28 March 2018 (UTC)

to do list

• early life
• education
• influences
• marriage
• children
• friends
• academics
• career

BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 02:31, 22 March 2018 (UTC)

BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 02:56, 22 March 2018 (UTC)I am not sure who wants to work on what yet? I could randomly assign topics at this point and if you guys want to switch you can if you need references on the info i provided above let me know BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 02:56, 22 March 2018 (UTC) below ↓↓↓ is my to do list since nobody has picked specific topics this will be random sorry

People are formatting to-dos and outlines all kinds of different ways. Doing a proper outline is most effective for organizing your article. Thank you for trying to get everyone on the same page. J.R. Council (talk) 19:38, 28 March 2018 (UTC)

division of tasks

• Early life sabimana.Claude
• Education Wyatt Becker (talk) 19:31, 3 April 2018 (UTC)
• Career BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 02:56, 22 March 2018 (UTC)
• Contributions to psychology BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 02:56, 22 March 2018 (UTC)
• Published Works Sabimana.Claude
• Personal life Wyatt Becker (talk) 19:31, 3 April 2018 (UTC)

BCFneuropsychndsu (talk) 02:56, 22 March 2018 (UTC)

Dr. Council's comments on Assn 5, above

1. I can't tell who did this because it is not signed.
2. These are good additions, but need to be combined with the other Assignment 5 work, below. J.R. Council (talk) 17:43, 28 March 2018 (UTC)This section looks very good. A great start on writing the article! Some specific comments:
3. I think Wyatt contributed, but I can't give credit if the work is not signed.
4. Claude should learn to format. If you don't format, everything goes into a single block of text and it's hard to follow. Type WP:Cheatsheet in the textbox to get a quick formatting guide for code. You can also click on Help inn the toolbar in the textbox when you are editing. You can also use the visual editor by going to Edit, rather than Edit source.
5. The separate sections should be combined into one.
6. You all should make equal contributions. Don't let Britney do all the work.
7. When the article is developed in the sandbox, click on More in the toolbar on top, then Move.

J.R. Council (talk) 19:51, 28 March 2018 (UTC)

Assignment 4

Sabimana.claude (talk) 20:13, 28 March 2018 (UTC)CHAMBERLIN, J. (n.d.). Like mother, like daughter. Retrieved March 22, 2018, from http://www.apa.org/monitor/jan01/kaslow.aspx Sabimana.claude (talk) 20:28, 28 March 2018 (UTC)FLORENCE KASLOW, Ph.D., A.B.P.P. (n.d.). Retrieved March 22, 2018, from https://www.executiveadvisors.org/florence-kaslow-phd-abpp Creating a new article is easy. You just move it from the sandbox once it's ready.

2001:4930:91:0:A175:B959:262E:5F63 (talk) 04:12, 21 March 2018 (UTC)Sabimana.claude (talk) 03:51, 21 March 2018 (UTC)Sabimana.claude (talk)Sabimana.claude (talk) 03:49, 21 March 2018 (UTC)BIG PROBLEM!: I don't see any work on Assignment 4 from Wyatt or Claude. J.R. Council (talk) 22:40, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

In this article that I found, It all talks about Florence kaslow's books and it is really hard to find more information about it.

whose are these↓ ???

1.Kaslow, F. (n.d.). Florence W. Kaslow Award for Distinguished Contributions to International Family Psychology: Terry Patterson, PhD, ABPP. PsycEXTRA Dataset. doi:10.1037/e518182006-014

2)Klein, S. B. (2013). Divorced fathers and their families – Legal, Economic and emotional dilemmas. Journal of family psychotherapy, 24(3), 265-266. doi:10.1080/08975353.2013.829382

3) How can I get more information about Florence Kaslow's back ground?

To Sabimana Claude: I can't see any signed contributions from you. I do see from the history that you have contributed. I will give you credit. Please learn how to sign your contributions! Do it in Edit source. J.R. Council (talk) 20:55, 21 March 2018 (UTC)

MY assignment four disappeared some how?? I wrote that florence did not yet have a wikipedia page, so there was no real way to critique past information except that she doest have one when she should as she has been influential in the field of psychotherapy. I originally asked if our article needed to be on wikipedia previously. 2001:4930:66:0:F12C:18C3:5A57:F322 (talk) 16:10, 29 March 2018 (UTC)

My references are below2001:4930:66:0:F12C:18C3:5A57:F322 (talk) 18:47, 29 March 2018 (UTC)