User:Whiteguru/Philippe Coutinho

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kpddg (talk · contribs) 14:30, 16 December 2021 (UTC)

Hello. I would like to review this article. Kindly give me some time. Your views are welcome. Thank You. Kpddg (talk) 14:30, 16 December 2021 (UTC)

Reviewed

I have been reviewing this article from sometime, before writing here. It looks fine. The language is good, reliable sources have been added, and images are good. I think it should be a good article. Kpddg (talk) 14:34, 16 December 2021 (UTC)

@@REDMAN 2019: I reviewed this article. It has passed on to 'good level'. Thank you for your contributions. Kpddg (talk) 14:37, 16 December 2021 (UTC)

Second opinion requested

The nomination was approved prematurely by a novice reviewer after noting issues with the article; the review has been reopened and a second opinion in the form of a full review by an experienced GA reviewer is being taken up. --Whiteguru (talk) 11:47, 17 December 2021 (UTC)

@Whiteguru:, I will not oppose a second opinion as long as it doesn't take another 4 months! :) REDMAN 2019 (talk) 14:50, 17 December 2021 (UTC)

Talk:Philippe_Coutinho/GA1

Observations

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

   HTML document size: 430 kB
   Prose size (including all HTML code): 48 kB
   References (including all HTML code): 189 kB
   Wiki text: 90 kB
   Prose size (text only): 24 kB (4332 words) "readable prose size"
   References (text only): 22 kB

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

The talk page raises a question about playing for Bayern Munich.The Lead suggests this is his current club. Which club is this fellow playing for now?

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):

2012-13
consider replacing Stewart Downing
Overlinking. Drop the link to Home Office. Do we need a link to Damien Comolli? If so, why?
Overlinking. We don't need a link to Anfield. assist. Man of the Match.
consider winning the free-kick from which Jordan Henderson scored Liverpool's sixth goal. (starting to turn into statistics)
out after being played in by Jordon Ibe.[33] we are not the match reporter.
2013–14
Overlinking. We don't need a link to Etihad Stadium.
On 13 April 2014, Coutinho scored the winning goal in the 78th minute in a 3–2 win against Manchester City. The result put Liverpool seven points ahead of Manchester City at the top of the Premier League table with four matches remaining. However, Manchester City had six matches remaining and went on to win the title, with Liverpool finishing second.[35]
This quote is not relevant to this article; it is match commentary. Remove.
set-up strikers Luis Suárez and Daniel Sturridge. Consider.
Reference 35 does not support earned praise from many pundits due to his long and accurate passing from midfield, dribbling skills and creative play to set-up strikers Luis Suárez and Daniel Sturridge. This is WP:PEACOCK and the entire sentence can be dropped.
Reference 36 is a good summary for this year.
2014–15
supplied the ball for Dejan Lovren
assisted both goals for Raheem Sterling
Overlinking: Ewood Park
scored past goalkeeper Shay Given
for Steven Gerrard's winner
ultimately losing to Eden Hazard and Harry Kane respectively.
2015–16

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:

Page created on 22 July 2008
Page has 5,615 edits by 2,410 editors.
There are 147 watchers on this page.
ClueBot NG has been on this page 116 times, indicative of regular vandalism and reverts.
The IA Bot has been over this page 8 times.
Page Protection has been applied 23 times since 2013. Page currently has indef WP:SEMI
Pending changes have been reverted 13 times
90 day page views = 240,857 views with a daily average of 2,647 views.

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

File:20180610 FIFA Friendly Match Austria vs. Brazil Philippe Coutinho 850 1692.jpg = Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 4.0 International license. and is too big. Recommended infobox image width is 200px.
File:Philippe Coutinho Inter (cropped).jpg = Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 3.0 Unported license.
File:Coutinho v Swansea (cropped).jpg = Creative Commons Attribution 2.0 Generic license.
File:Marc Wilson and Coutinho (cropped).jpg = Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 2.0 Generic license.
File:Philippe Coutinho 2014.jpg = Creative Commons Attribution 2.0 Generic license.
File:Coutinho (34018689393).jpg = Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 2.0 Generic license.
File:Spartak Moscow VS. Liverpool (12).jpg = Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 3.0 Unported license.
File:Coutinho vs Valladolid.jpg = Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 4.0 International license.
File:Coutinho Sanchez Brazil vs Chile.jpg = Creative Commons Attribution 2.0 Generic license.
File:Coutinho 2018.jpg = Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 3.0 Unported license.
File:Phillipe Coutinho 2013-08-27.jpg = Creative Commons Attribution 2.0 Generic license.
Too many images. Three images are recommended for excision. Marc Wilson and Coutinho, Philippe Coutinho 2014, Coutinho 2018.

Overall: