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GA Reassessment

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Starts GA Reassessment. The review will follow the same sections of the Article. Thank you --Whiteguru (talk) 22:06, 27 November 2021 (UTC)

 

Instructions: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Good_article_reassessment

The page number is incorrect for this GAR.

Link to GAR page

Notability: WP:GNG

Notability: WP:NAF and fiction: Consider Books and Films

Observations

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   HTML document size: 189 kB
   Prose size (including all HTML code): 28 kB
   References (including all HTML code): 66 kB
   Wiki text: 55 kB
   Prose size (text only): 18 kB (3112 words) "readable prose size"
   References (text only): 14 kB
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  • Gyatso is a personal name. There is no need to put Monk before Gyatso after the first occurrence.
  • Book Two: Earth → If we are talking about a book, why is the second season, in the text instead of second book? Ditto following sections.
  • Link in the Lead to Air Nomads loops back to this article.
  1. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  1. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  • Lead addresses different formats: trading cards, video games, T-shirts, web comics and the live-action film The Last Airbender
  • Avatar: The Last Airbender gives a succinct intrduction;
  • Book One: Water develops plot;
  • Book Two: Earth addresses Earthbending and acquiring the Avatar state via the chakras
  • Book Three: Fire addresses learning Firebending;
  • Graphic Novel Trilogies - overview of comic plots;
  • The Legend of Korra: reincarnation as Korra;
  • Book One: Air - the education of the young Korra;
  • Book Two: Spirits - about Tenzin and Korra losing spirit contact;
  • Book Three: Change - Korra seeking spirit contact and guidance;
  • Games: expands the references to games in the Lead;
  • Films: the film comic and the film;
  • Creation and conception: backstory to plot development;
  • Personality and characteristics: formation of character, diet and behaviour;
  • Bending the elements: Aang is capable of bending all four elements (air, water, earth and fire)
  • Some overlinking follows: living memory, Tenzin, metallurgy, nature, cultural heritage, confiscated or destroyed, material world, spirit world.
  • The Avatar State: the link to Avatar State in this section loops back to this section; should be removed.
  • Critical reception section has Expand section tag
  1. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  • The article presents neutral point of view
  1. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  • Page created 23 May 2005;
  • Page has 6,038 edits by 2,373 editors
  • Majority of page edits in 2007;
  • Page has 191 watchers;
  • Wikidata is most comprehensive;
  • 112 bot edits on the page which ClueBot NG has the largest count. Page is subject to vandalism.
  • 90 day pageviews = 67,740 with a daily average of 744 views.
  1. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  • File:Avatar Aang.png = illustration of a character or characters in a comic book = fair use under United States copyright law.
  • File:Legend of Korra Aang.png = illustration of a character or characters in a comic book = fair use under United States copyright law.
  • File:Avatar reincarnations.png = illustration of a character or characters in a comic book = fair use under United States copyright law.
  • Images appropriately tagged; fair use rationale appropriate.
  1. Overall:
  • A number of minor issues noted, links that loop, overlinking.
  • Article provides both foundation and exegesis of the Chinese and Buddhist (including Tibetan) influence and disciplines acquired and practiced by the principal character Aang.
  • There is coverage of other media with links to main articles (comics, video games and the like)
  • The article has minor excursus into plots but these are managed well.
  • With some attention to the minor issues raised above the article remains at Good Article status. --Whiteguru (talk) 07:35, 30 November 2021 (UTC)

 

 Passed

 


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