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Activity 2: From Scratch

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=How_I_Met_Your_Mother&oldid=42285586

I found the first edit of this article to provide a good starting ground for developing the page in the future. Whilst the article does not contain much information, it provides a simple overview of the plot of How I Met Your Mother, and the main characters in the show. It is important, however, to also note that the first edit was created in 2006, when only the first series of the show had aired and therefore the page lacked in-depth information about the show's plot in the later series. Nevertheless, the first edit could have been improved by including a summary of each of the episodes in the first season.

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=How_I_Met_Your_Mother&oldid=42266999

The second edit was extremely subjective and voiced the opinion of the editor, exemplified in the first sentence 'How I Met Your Mother is a 2005 crappy CBS sitcom that premiered on September 19 2005.' This is an unsubstantiated claim that does not have an object truth to it. The subjective tone of this edit does not adhere to the aim of Wikipedia to be an objective and balanced encyclopaedia. Furthermore, adding more subheadings would make the article easier to read. Subheading could potentially include: Plot Summary and Reviews of the TV Series.