User:WILDbobbo

Bio

About me

I’m a student from China and my major is Early Childhood Education. I passed the National Preschool Teacher Certification and had two weeks of probation experience in kindergarten. I am interested in singing, watching movies, traveling and reading detective and mystery novels, like The Dedication of Suspect X written by a Japanese author Higashino Keigo. Other things about me: My favorite Korean group is Bulletproof Boy Scouts (BTS) and they are one of the driving forces in my life.

My Wikipedia activities

Because of the way teachers taught in college classes, this was the first time I came into contact with Wikipedia and used it. I have not been involved in any publishing or modification on Wikipedia yet. I hope to read a lot of professional knowledge about the universe, the celestial bodies and other things related to my favorite and hobbies on Wikipedia. I know about the Early Childhood Education major and the specific process of getting the teacher certification, so that I can provide these materials and information to others in the future.

Article Evaluation

I visited The Invisible Guest page on Wikipedia, and I found three aspects of it worth commenting on: whether this article is up-to-date, whether this article should retain anything, and whether there is informal language in this article.

There are some age issues with the article introduced and supplemented by the film The Invisible Guest. I have read that the latest time of the article's editor is January 4th, 2020, which is about a month away from today. The main thing is that the film was released in cinemas in February 2016, and the article was originally edited at the end of March 2017, a year after its release. The editors of this article need to pay close attention to the latest information and related information of the film, and timely supplement and improve the film.

Let me talk about the chapters and the length of this article. It is obvious from the article that the content of the film is very long and detailed, while the length of the film's cast list, filming and reception desk is very short. I would like to know more about the movie's release time in different countries and more about the main characters, but I have no way of knowing. This aspect still needs to strengthen and perfect. I think the length of each chapter should be meticulous and well-founded, and other chapters and parts need to be added and edited emphatically.

There are some informal language in the article. In describing the introduction of the film in detail, the article used many colloquial and informal languages, for instance, so, and, say, and other informal languages. There are some colloquial and informal sentences in the description, for example, “Félix and even herself, and points to an apartment across the street, where Tomás is lurking”. In addition, in the description of the movie, there are many sentences where "run on" and “comma splice” exists.

These three questions are very common in every article. The literature collected in this article on the film The Invisible Guest is accurate and up to date, but the editor of the article needs to strengthen the above three aspects, so that readers can read more comfortably, smoothly and clearly understand the film.