User:Tracy Dao

I'm Tracy (2000-Now) who come from Vietnam. My mother lets me enroll in dance class when I was young so maybe that's the reason why I'm very interested in dancing. My style is Jazz Funk and dancing becomes a part of my life, I dance whenever I feel bored or disappointed to relax and release my brain. Moreover, I'm a traveling person. I really like traveling around the world to extend myself, to know more many different cultures. I can play the piano and Yiruma who is a pianist and composer I have admired extremely. I have played some popular pieces of him such as "Kiss the Rain", "River Flows in You", all his pieces always attract me with the melodic and full of emotion.

Article Critique

I visited the Bầu cua cá cọp (squash-crab-fish-tiger) page on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: its lack of citations, its lack of history and its lack of section titles.


Citations

The citations in this page are too limited. It only has a citation in the first paragraph and in next couple paragraphs, there are no citations in there which make pretty much confusing to prove that they are reliable sources. To increase reliance, the article should put more citations and some extra reliable sources.

History

It is obvious that every article should have their own history to let everyone know about origin of them. Surprisingly, this page just mentions the rule of the game but doesn’t mention anything about the history - how this game appeared.

Section Titles

I think maybe because of limited information, this article doesn’t have any section titles. However, it should use some exact titles for every single information to make it obviously.

Summary

Depending on how they create this page, I’d say this page is worse and unreliable. The information of this page doesn’t prove me they are reliable sources because it does have only a citation for whole article. Moreover, there are extremely interesting information that help readers understand more clearly about the game but they aren’t mentioned in this page.

(I posted a question on this page here)