User:Snappedrain23/2WayMirror Review
Review of 2WAYMIRROR
[edit]This article seems to be well-written and descriptive. The lead section is confusing as it contains some extraneous information. For example, the section on the inspiration for Hanna's EP is repeated in the Composition section. The pre-save information should be in the promotion section. Despite this, it still is a well-written lead section. It just needs some adjusting and more information.
The structure of the article is decently organized and the order is good for readers. I also congratulate the original author on the sources. There are a lot of good and reliable sources pulled for this article. However, the article is short and I would love to see it expanded further as more information comes around for the subject.
The tone of the article is neutral and there seems to be no bias towards the subject at all. The content is well-written and as I stated earlier, the article just needs expansion.
A suggestion to improve the article would to be include some quotes or statements from Hanna about the production of the EP. She has released numerous social media statements and Youtube videos about the writing process and the production of 2WayMirror.