User:Skmatth

Needs Improvement Articles

Crème brûlée Article

• This article needs an improved Ingredients format. The bullet list not in a linear format looks strange.
• The Technique section should be above the Crema Catalana section
• There is a link to a page that does not exist
• The layout of the photos could be improved; showing images of different steps of the item could be helpful as opposed to only showing the finished product

Pop Music Article

• The content could be more expanded with the sub-genres
• The stylistic section is dense and needs to be broken into parts
• the callouts on the side with quotations seem random and not useful
• a time period is missing in the stylistic evolution section

Potential Articles to Edit

Walt Disney Classics

Electronic rock

Hawaiiloa

@Etherfire:

Walt Disney Classics

List of Problems

• Needs to be copy edited
• The table of contents looks overwhelming
• "Prehistory" title could be changed
• The organization of the sub-subcategories under "North American release history" can have a different format to differentiate it from the timeline sub titles
• Some sections need a more informative title
• Has tags at the top of page

Tasks

• copy edit
• edit titles
• reformat sub-subcategories
• reorganize table of contents

Hawaiiloa

List of Problems

• article does not clarify if it covers the mythical concept of Hawaiiloa or the modern day canoe
• article is more focused on the mythical god but uses a photo of the canoe
• needs subcategories
• style and tone needs to reflect encyclopedic tone

Tasks

• copy edit
• edit to match encyclopedic tone
• create subcategory about the modern use of Hawaiiloa
• add photo to match the focus of mythical god