User:Scook717

Bio

About me

My name is Sienna and I am a student of many interests and hobbies. Some of my hobbies are starting to feel immature, for instance I love to play video gaming and face timing with my friends. Some of my other hobbies I'm more proud of and are more interesting, I love to sketch out houses then build them on a 3-D software to make my creations come to life. Also I enjoy working long hours at my job, and I also really like playing and watching football. My favorite band is the $uicide Boy$ who I listen to daily! This band is made up of two men with the names of Scrim (aka $lick $loth) and Ruby (da Cherry). Scrim said, “The reason me and Ruby do so much music is this is our fuckin’ therapy, it’s the best therapy I’ve gotten to this day,” I love this because their music has been my therapy as well and shaped me into who i am today. I'd describe myself as bubbly, outgoing, spontaneous and goal-oriented.

My Wikipedia Interests

Some of my Wikipedia interests are to either write about music artists that mean a lot to me that most people don't know about to give them the recognition they deserve along with adding more facts to some of the well known artists that have already been written about.

Article Evaluation

Tomodachi life

Growing up with the newest technology I've had many versions and different brands of games all over the place. Video games have become an important part of my life and have been one of the last remaining shared interests between little me and me today. Nintendo has always been one of my favorite brands of gaming technology. A very popular game that I love that almost everyone I know has played before is a game called Tomodachi life. I visited the Tomodachi life article on Wikipedia. And found three aspects of it worth commenting on: non-reliable sources, not up to date, and the lack of game explanation.

In the reference section of the Tomodachi life article on Wikipedia there are 62 references total. I proceeded to click on three external links that caught my interest (through the title). I was surprised to see that none were reliable links. The first one I clicked on was the most strange out of the three. This source doesn’t tell you much about anything or information that is useful to us, the pricing is in Japanese currency, the person who wrote this looks fake and the video attached is unavailable. A major thing that I noticed was that the article never states it was the first color which is said in the wiki article where this link was attached. This concludes that this source does not support what was said in the wiki article. Overall I think the resources used should provide us with better support and give us more useful information.

While reading through most of the article I realize that most of the information provided dates back to 2013 through 2014, other than those two years the only other new information is one thing in 2018 and 2021. This is a video game so I don’t expect there to be much new after the first couple years of it being around but it would be nice to update, add or review the information that has already been posted. The most recent date I could find was that some of the resources were retrieved in May 13, 2022 but in the article May 21, 2021 was the last mentioned date giving us an update on a new release of a similar game called Miitopia which isn’t anything about Tomodochi life.

Lastly, the thing I noticed immediately after reading the article was how little was said about the game itself. Knowing this game and it being important to me, I feel like the game should be recognized for all the amazing features it includes in-game. The whole game is based on real life which includes many realistic scenarios, situations, and popular activities. Some things not mentioned are you can have concerts, write songs, have pets, go to a fair and many more! This article is about the game itself so I feel like it should include and mention more of these amazing things the game has to offer.

In conclusion I feel as if the article should talk more about the game itself and its interesting features. The article seemed to put its primary focus on the future and the history of the game rather than about what the game actually is and what it includes. This game is impressive as it has no official ending, includes many different real-life scenarios and activities, and especially, you’ll randomly think “I wonder how all my people are doing right now.” Other than the game itself the article definitely explains how the game was created and its updates very precisely.