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Article Critique

I visited the Trần Phú page on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: Tran Phu Street, the contribution, and its lack of citations and external links."

Tran Phu street

I've known that his name was named to a lot of streets in Vietnam. In Hanoi (Ha Trung street connect with Son Tay street), and the ramp between Quang Trung and Nguyen Trai streets - in Ha Dong city), in Ho Chi Minh city (Nguyen Thi Minh Khai street connect with the Tran Hung Dao street), in Hai Phong city (Nguyen Duc Canh street connect with Hoang Dieu street), in Da Nang, Nha Trang, Dalat (Hoang Van Thu street connect with Tran Hung Dao street), Vung Tau, Cam Pha city, and in Halong city. Therefore, it is one of the most important information about Tran Phú, but I don't see this mentioned on the page.

The contribution

Tran Phu is a historical person who made many contribution to Vietnam, he was the first secretary of Vietnam, but the writer does not mention it on the article. Therefore, people don't know how important he was for Vietnamese political organization.

Citations and external links

There are not many citations mentioned on this page. General references are listed at the bottom, but most of these are in Vietnamese language, so it's hard for international reader to understand what are mentioned. Furthermore, the external links are not mentioned on this page. This article is not specific, and the information and sources given on this page are too succinct and seem like a summarizing paragraph. This article needs more citations and reliable sources that help reader can understand easily.

Summary

Overall, I'd rate this page as "bad." This article is brief about the person who is mentioned on this article, and there are pieces of information that are not included on this page, which I think useful for people of the worldwide using this instrument . The page cites very few sources and citations, so it's impossible to say whether or not the information is reliable. Moreover, this page uses a lot of Vietnamese include the citation and the sources provided in this article, so it's hard for foreigner to read and understand what the writer wrote about. This page need to rewrite and edit some sources.