User:Samlederman/sandbox
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Article Evaluation
Secutor
The secutor article contains mostly facts, with some omissions of details, such as the dorsal ridge present on the helmets of secutors. Instead it elects to describe the helmet as lacking protursions, which is also true, but also implies that a dorsal ridge would be uncharacteristic of a secutor helm. Other times the article is inconsistent, providing latin translations of some equipment while omitting translations for 'loincloth' and 'wide belt'.
Also, the only message in the talk page was posted by a sock puppet of a now banned user. Not a good sign.