User:S.H.L1004
Bio
[edit]About me
[edit]I'm a running start student who lives in the Pacific Northwest. I like to play tennis with my friends and have been playing tennis for 2 years in my high school. I like to watch animated movies, especially Pixar or Disney movies. Other things about me: I have been playing the piano since I was 5 years old, my sister and I like to take pictures of nature, and my family owns two dogs which are both Labradors. Dogs can provide many emotional and physical benefits.[1]
My Wikipedia interests
[edit]I have used Wikipedia as a resource for collecting information when doing projects in science or history class in the past, but I haven't edited a page or created one. However, if I end up working on Wikipedia over the long term, and pass by a page where it talks about something I know well, I would stop and edit the page to give more information. I also would like to edit pages of famous people I admire, or even create a page and talk about their career performances. For example, I would like to edit pages about Coco Chanel, Son Heung-min, and Yuna Kim. As a volunteer, I hope I can help someone else to earn knowledgeable information through Wikipedia and be a helpful resource to them.
Article evaluation
[edit]I have been interested in figure skating for the past few months. I have watched a lot of videos of figure skating and have been following news of a few figure skaters I have been interested in. I want Wikipedia to have all the general information they can have of figure skaters. Looking at several figure skaters' Wikipedia pages, I visited the Lee June-hyoung article on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: its lack of complete citations, its lack of structure, and its lack of information.
Citations
[edit]There are actually quite a lot of citations on this page, and references are listed at the bottom with the correct facts cited throughout the article. However, some very important facts are missing their citations. The article could be improved by adding citations to facts that are missing them, and if finding a citation is difficult, adding a wiki link can help support the fact.
Structure
[edit]Looking at different Wikipedia pages of sports players, I've noticed that they have a particular structure in their pages. The Lee June-hyoung page seems to follow the structure of sports player pages but fails to include some necessary structures. For example, the Wikipedia page of sports players includes a section titled "Early life," but this page fails to. Simply organizing the facts and following the general structure of sports players can help this page look more professional.
Information
[edit]I found out that a lot of people look at sports players' Wikipedia pages to find out their career lives and their accomplishments in a specific sport season. That said, I know that Lee June-hyoung participated in the 2019-2020 figure skating season, but this page is missing that particular information. It does include information about his 2019-2020 season on charts throughout the page, but under the section titled "career," it's missing the 2019-2020 season.
Summary
[edit]In general, I think this page is well organized and can be easily improved by adding more citations. The section titled "2013-2014 season" even says on the page that citation is needed. Also, having a good structure and using professional words of figure skating such as triple axel, TR, and CO, can help this page look more professional. Furthermore, having more detailed information about Lee June-hyoung can help people to know more about him, which can help his career life as a sports player.
References
[edit]- ^ Fricchione, Dr. (Feb 2016). "The health benefits and risks of pet ownership". Harvard Health Publishing. Retrieved 27 Sep 2020.
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