User:Ritaaa117

Bio

About me

Thank you for visiting my user page. My mane is Rita. I am interested in skiing and hiking. Last month, I climbed the Colchuck Peak with my friends. Colchuck Peak is an 8,705-foot (2,653-metre) mountain located in the Stuart Range, in the Alpine Lakes Wilderness in Chelan County of Washington state.I enjoy participating in these activities in my spare time. I can make new friends. I can breathe the fresh air and watch the beautiful scenery while hiking.

My Wikipedia interests

If i end up working on content here over the long term, i hope to accomplish as a volunteer. I will try my best to refine the keywords in the fields I know. Check the content of these keywords for errors. When new news reports come out, I will update the content of wikipedia in time and mark the source of the citations.

References

1. Colchuck Peak

Article Evaluation

I visited the Alice's Wonderland page on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: citations, age, and structure. Wikipedia is a free online encyclopedia that contains millions of pages. However, Some of pages still has some defect. Users can edit the page based on current news.

This article needs to add the citation. On this page, each related word on this page are hyperlinked and cited with an appropriate and reliable source, but there is no citation at the end of the extracted sentence. So, this page’s external links and citation need to be completed and added.

This article is not up-to-date. This movie is a short black-and-white silent movie produced in the 20th century. This story is very famous and has been remade many times. I searched Google for this entry to find a lot of information about this movie; nevertheless, it was not mentioned on this page. Including some important information, such as the adaptation of this movie by a fairy tale book, the screenwriter and voiceover of the movie were not mentioned.

In my opinion, there are some irrelevant sections and sentences. On this page, there is a module about 'popular culture'. I think the content in this module is superfluous, and there is not much connection with the topic. The content needs to be rewritten. I think it is possible to add some evaluations and winning records that have been remade later. You can also add photos and stills of movie actors. This movie can be searched on the web and links can be added.

Wikipedia can help us learn a lot of information, and this information is constantly being updated. Users can search the information, and add references to complete the page. I think this is a good learning way, it is like a teacher, let us understand different aspects of knowledge.

Reference:

Alice's Wonderland, From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Alice%27s_Wonderland