User:Rghx/sandbox
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Culinary Arts Wiki Page[[1]]
- Sections listed are extremely short and shallow
- Information is substantially reduced as a user reaches the bottom of the page
- Sections lack clarity, focus and a direction that adheres to Wikipedia's editorial standards
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"=headingtitle=" Bird Food Wiki Page [[2]]
- lacks coherent, succinct information within sections
- non-encyclopedic narration - sounds a bit like recommendations/marketing
- all sections need expansion - incompleteness is present