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For February 28th: The article I am reviewing is titled Mobile social network.
This article gives the reader many details on a variety of characteristics of mobile social networks. It begins by defining what mobile social networks are, provides some history throughout the past decades, explains different types of networks, and outlines some safety concerns regarding these networks. The article provides a broad overview of what mobile social networks are and readers can definitely grasp the concept by reading the article in its entirety. The information is relevant and very applicable to modern day society, as everyone is digitally connected through their smartphones. While one of the strengths of this article is how much variety it provides, it seems to only do a superficial job in explaining each of its components. Because the article includes so many subtopics, each section only gets a small description that does not provide much information whatsoever. While the article was meant to give an overview of mobile social networks, it left out many other important reasons why people use these networks. In terms of editing the article, I would include a section about another use of social networks, or add onto an existing section to give a more in depth explanation of that designated use. Mobile social networks have a variety of uses and are applicable to today's society, but this article does not give a very detailed description of all of these uses.
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