User:Pause and Peruse/Westernization/Pause and Peruse Peer Review

Peer review

Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects:

Lead

Guiding questions:

Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?

Content

Guiding questions:

Is the content added relevant to the topic?
Is the content added up-to-date?
Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?

Tone and Balance

Guiding questions:

Is the content added neutral?
Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?

Sources and References

Guiding questions:

Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
Does the content accurately reflect what the cited sources say? (You'll need to refer to the sources to check this.)
Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
Are the sources current?
Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?
Are there better sources available, such as peer-reviewed articles in place of news coverage or random websites? (You may need to do some digging to answer this.)
Check a few links. Do they work?

Organization

Guiding questions:

Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?

Images and Media

Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media

Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
Are images well-captioned?
Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

For New Articles Only

If the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.

Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions

Guiding questions:

Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
What are the strengths of the content added?
How can the content added be improved?

Examples of good feedback

A good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.

Peer review of "Homemaking"
Peer review of this article about a famous painting

Additional Resources

Check out the Editing Wikipedia PDF for general editing tips and suggestions.

General info

Whose work are you reviewing?

(Wiki.H.A)

Link to draft you're reviewing
Sent through email
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Westernization

Evaluate the drafted changes

Lead:

No, the lead has not been updated to reflect the new content added

Yes, the lead includes an introductory sentence that concisely describes the article's topic

No

The lead is detailed but remains concise in explaining the concept of Westernization and its historical roots.

The lead is missing a citation.

Content:

Yes, the content added about the United Arab Emirates' experience with Westernization is relevant to the broader topic of Westernization.

Yes, the content appears to be up-to-date, discussing modern-day forms of Westernization and globalization in the context of the United Arab Emirates.

No

There is no content that is missing or content that does not belong.

The added content about the United Arab Emirates directly addresses topics related to historically underrepresented populations or regions, contributing to a more inclusive understanding of Westernization's impact.

Tone and balance:

The added content is neutral

While the content primarily focuses on negative aspects of Western influence, a more balanced perspective could include discussion of potential benefits or positive outcomes resulting from Westernization in the UAE.

The content may overrepresent negative viewpoints regarding Westernization's impact, potentially overshadowing potential positive aspects.

While the content does not overtly attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position over another, a more balanced representation of viewpoints could ensure neutrality.

Sources and References:

All new content is backed up by reliable secondary sources of information.

The content accurately reflects what the cited sources say.

The sources appear to be thorough, reflecting the available literature on the topic.

The sources are current and up-to-date.

Includes a diverse spectrum of authors, representing different perspectives and backgrounds.

The links provided in the article are functional and lead to the intended sources.

Organization:

The writing is generally clear and concise, effectively conveying the concept of Westernization and its impact on the United Arab Emirates.

The language used is straightforward and easy to understand.

Images:

(not applicable) no images were added.