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[edit]Baseball
[edit]- "Result and key moments": all but the first paragraph
- "Game summary"
- "Context & Aftermath"
- 1951 National League tie-breaker series – "Game 3 summary":
- "Ironically, that potential rally..."
- "The incident prompted Gordon McLendon..."
- "During this Dodgers rally..."
- "Shot Heard 'Round the World":
- "Thomson's role in the game" (was subsequently revised/shortened)
- "Origins of the phrase"
- Game 1:
- "Wertz opened the 10th inning..."
- Game 7:
- "The RBIs by Hodges..."
- "While being shut out..."
- lead sentences on the next two paragraphs ("The Yankees would have..."; "The Yankees would threaten...")
- Game summary:
- "Yankees fielders recorded..."
- "In addition to these balls..."
- "Key plays" of Game 7 (was subsequently deleted)
- Link to the old version containing that section
- Game 6:
- "The Cardinals’ 1–0 lead..."
- Game 6:
- "In the sixth inning..."
- Game 7:
- "Gedman’s home run..."
College Football
[edit]- "Game summary": all but the first sentence
- "Analysis":
- "Defenses" to re-arrange content previously under "Game summary"
- "Fourth-down decisions" (was slightly shortened/re-arranged)
- "Aftermath":
- "After the season..."
- "In 2010..."
- "Game summary":
- "Notre Dame started..."
- "After a Michigan State punt...": added details ("including an...")
- "Notre Dame play-calling controversy" to separate previous content from the game summary; shortened the quotes
- two-paragraph game summary ahead of the lengthier one
- "The Game":
- one-paragraph game summary ahead of the lengthier one
- "Key plays & Scoring":
- "Arkansas would get..."
- "Game":
- one-paragraph game summary ahead of the lengthier one
- "Oklahoma answered..."
- "Pre-game information":
- "This was presumably caused..."
- "The weather was expected..."
- "Game summary":
- one-paragraph game summary ahead of the lengthier one
- "All the scoring..."
- "The Cougars added..."
- "In the third quarter..."
- "Playing with the wind..."
- "Game summary":
- "In the second quarter..."
- "After a 65-yard punt..."
- "After the ensuing kick-off..."
- "Opening the second half..."
- "Penn State cashed in..."
Pro Football
[edit]- additions to the game summary: context on turnovers and replacements
- two-paragraph game summary ahead of the lengthier one
- "Legacy" to re-arrange content under new subheadings
- four-paragraph game summary ahead of the lengthier one
- two-paragraph game summary ahead of the lengthier one (all but the first sentence)
- "Background" on the teams' playoff history and their 1972 season, including a summary of their previous matchup
- "Game synopsis", summarizing the game prior to the eponymous event
Hockey
[edit]- Started the game reports, which were subsequently heavily revised or deleted (including a "Statistical summary", which was deleted).
- Link to my original version
- Link to the version I revised
- Game 7:
- "The Rangers opened..."
- "The Rangers' next goal..."
- "Vancouver’s best scoring chances..."
- "[...] with a short-handed goal..."
- "With six-and-a-half minutes..."
- "Following close-range chances..."
- "[...] during which..."
- "In the final 37 seconds..."