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User:Nehal al-Shamy/Ibrahim Rauza/Hganaini Peer Review

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General info

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Whose work are you reviewing?

Nehal al-Shamy

Link to draft you're reviewing
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Nehal%20al-Shamy/Ibrahim_Rauza?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes

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This article is well structured and very informative. The lead section is easy to understand and very brief for a non expert. The author give also an interesting coverage to all the sections; architecture, patron and history with neutral tone. The sources need to be cited with Wikipedia's style. The author needs to use the "cite" button and provide the links to make it more into the Wikipedia's style. The article also lacks images and maps to make it easier to understand. Overall, the article is well structured and organized but it needs more Wikipedia's style citation and visuals.

Lead

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It is well-organized and brief and gives interesting mention to other Wikipedia articles.

Content

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The content is well-structured and organized.

The author needs to delete the ":" in the end of the titles to make it more into Wikipedia style. The citation needs to be more into Wikipedia style.

The author needs to mention other Wikipedia articles in his article.

Tone and Balance

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It was neutral and unbiased.

Sources and References

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The author give a good and reliable sources, books, articles and websites.

Organization

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The article is very well-organized.

Images and Media

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This article needs using more images and maps of the Ibrahim Rauza.