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Articles for Improvement

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Nike sweatshops:

  • Lead section fails to accurately summarize content points
  • Citations are needed for verification of content validity
  • Organization of content could be more effective
  • Subheadings or bullets could be incorporated under content sections

Civil ceremony:

  • Lead section should be revised to reflect content
  • New sections could be created from lead section information
  • Citations are needed for verification of content validity
  • Not enough references are included

Potential Articles to Edit

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Problems and Tasks for Assigned Articles

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Problems

  • The article's writing and formatting style does not follow the Wiki style guidelines
  • It is missing a lead section
  • Existing content should be organized into different sections to improve clarity
  • Headings and subheadings should be added
  • Additional citations are needed
  • Visual representation could be improved through the addition of images

Tasks

  • Sort through the ideas presented in the existing content
    • Determine if any points are being made and which can be separated into subsections
  • Construct a lead section from the existing content
    • Ensure that it briefly, but accurately summarizes the article's points
  • Incorporate Wikipedia's summary style into the article to improve organization
  • Include headings for clarification and better article structure
    • Ensure it accurately introduces information and subtopics
  • Adjust tone where needed
  • If possible, locate more references about the topic and add them
  • Add citations where missing
    • If can't be provided then unreliable information should be deleted
  • If possible, locate images that can illustrate the information presented in the article


Problems

  • Lead section could be longer
  • Grammatical errors are present
  • Headings should be formatted the same
  • Subsections could be added from existent content
  • Information should be organized and placed with better corresponding section

Tasks

  • Verify talk page and sources (Completed)
    • Some of the advice/information discussed requires extensive research of references (Completed)
  • The lead section briefly addresses the topic and only some parts of the content (Not necessary after all)
    • Move information around so that it reflects points to be presented
  • Reformat sections for clarification
    • Look at the possibility of separating the murders by state and giving each a subheading instead - makes it easier to identify information
  • Fix headings so that they all match
    • Name of victim, states of murder, or both
  • Fix minor grammatical errots
  • Create "In Popular Culture" section (Completed)