I'm Diem Nguyen (1996- Present), and I'm an international student at Everett Community College. I have just been in the U.S. for 4 months. Before I came here, I already had 2 years of college in Vietnam. Some people said I was a friendly and helpful person. Yes, I am. But sometimes I was really easy to get mad and lose control because I am a hot tempered person. I love travelling, especially travelling around my country- Vietnam which has a lot of beautiful landscapes. Beside, I have just been to Singapore, Malaysia, and Korea. I want to make this countries list larger in the future. My favorite music instrument is ukulele which has 4 strings and look really cute. I can play several songs with ukulele. I also like shopping and painting my nails.

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Article Review

I visited the Nguyen Ba Thanh page on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: the lack of citations and reliable sources, the neutrality, and the brief form of the page.

Citations and Sources

I visited this page, and noticed that this page lacks citations and reliable sources which are required for any Wikipedia article. The article contains facts without any proper citation. Some references are cited on the page, but there is no article for them. Besides that, clicking on the links that have been cited by the writer only lead to dead links which I could not read. The reliability of these given links is highly questionable. Additionally, "external links" would make this article better.

Neutrality

This page seems to be breaking the rule of neutral information and viewpoint of Wikipedia. The page also contains a lot of unreliable sources about Nguyen Ba Thanh. Most of information of this page led readers to bias and negative attitude about Nguyen Ba Thanh. This article does not mention about contributions of this person who helped Danang to be one of the best city of Vietnam. This article would have been much better if the article contained unbiased information with reliable sources.

Form layout

This Wikipedia page is brief and too short. The page does not display any pictures or photographs of this person, as well as any form of brief information box to inform reader about the personal life, and the political life of Nguyen Ba Thanh. This page only focuses on 2 points that are the controversies and death. Generally, a Wikipedia page is informative, and contains a lot of unbiased information which this page clearly did not.

Summary

Overall, I'd rate this page as “bad”. This article requires both reliable sources and unbiased information which will gain the trust of the reader, and strengthen the ethos of the writer. In addition, this page is heavily biased and not detailed enough to be a good article because Nguyen Ba Thanh was a good council president of Danang. He had made the city better when he was still on the terms of president, but this page was just biased. This can make reader think that the writer is anti- Nguyen Ba Thanh. Finally, this page has a bad layout without any photographs or information box.