User:Mcquipai120
Bio
[edit]About me:
[edit]I'm a very social person and get along with people great; I have been this way since I was a little kid. I have big interests in softball , I played for a couple years when i was in Elementary school, I played volleyball in middle school, I also did wrestling in middle school. Other facts about me: I have a 2 year old German Shepard Pit bull mix dog and a 17 year old Thoroughbred Quarter horse. They are the best kind of horse.[1] I also have a 2009 dodge avenger which is the best car.
Wikipedia:
[edit]Some things I plan on doing on Wikipedia is editing things I find interest one and changing or adding some facts that I might think are not included on the page. Such as softball, volleyball, and wrestling which are my interests. Also maybe some facts about dogs and horses which I know a lot about.
Article Evaluation:
[edit]I’ve liked the brand Carmex for a while now, but I have heard many bad and good things about this brand on Wikipedia. So with that I want Wikipedia’s coverage on Carme to be as good as it can be, and with that in mind, I visited the Carmex page on Wikipedia, and found a couple of this brand worth talking about: Its global emphasis and its lack of citations.
I’ve noticed that many Wikipedia articles about the brand Carmex try to capture a global sense of how this brand is bad or good, and this article does say that Camrex is not the best lip balm to use on your lips just because of some of the side effects, after reading that I know, that Carmex is not a brand that most people could or what to use because of those side effects.
In this article, I did not find many citations. I did not see any cited articles that they got their information from, so it was hard for me to tell if these facts were true or not. They did have the date for when the article was published. Overall, I do wish that they had cited the articles they got their information from so that I know that these facts in the article are true or if they weren’t.
With the information I received, I would rate this article a 5/10. The information they provided me was great information and I will keep it in mind. However, the page did not cite any sources so I could have other sources to go to and see whether or not I could continue to use this brand of lip balm. Also, this is one out of many articles I have read about this brand of lip balm so therefore I don’t know for sure if this brand is bad like the article I read has said.
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Reference
[edit]- ^ Lee, April (2020-05-06). "13 Breathtaking Mixed Breed Horses You May Not Have Heard About". Helpful Horse Hints. Retrieved 2022-09-27.