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My name is Briana. I'm using Wikipedia as part of a project in my History of Psychology class. Hi Briana, This is Dr. d. I have evaluated your articles and following are my comments. Please select one of those I think will work and use it for your project. Good luck and let me know of any questions. Chris Hatcher (psychologist)-ok Norman Triplett-great!! Erikson's stages of psychosocial development--excellent Criminal psychology-not elated enough from a historical perspective. Forensic psychology is taken already. WebFlower1 (talk) 02:55, 2 March 2012 (UTC)
I will be editing Erikson's stages of psychosocial development. My three references are:
Slator, C. L. (2003). Generativity versus stagnation: An elaboration of erikson’s adult stage of human development. Journal of Adult Development,10(1), 55-65.
Studer, J. R. (2006). Erik erikson's psychosocial stages applied to supervision. Guidance and Counseling,21(3), 168-173.
Clark, J. J. (2010). Life as a source of theory: Erik erikson's contributions, boundaries, and marginalities. In T. Miller (Ed.), Handbook of Stressful Transitions Across the Lifespan (pp. 59-83). New York, NY: Springer Science Business Media.
3/9/2012 Outline and New Resources • Beginning Paragraph • Stage Chart o Make sure to find sources for columns: approximate age, significant relationship, existential question, and examples. If no references can be found, delete the columns if favor of different ones. • All of the following: Be sure each has sufficient examples and add existential question to the ones that do not have it. o Hope: Trust vs. Mistrust Expand on topic o Will: Autonomy vs. Shame and Doubt Expand on concepts of shame and doubt o Purpose: Initiative vs. Guilt Removal of redundant sentence in second paragraph Expand on topic o Competence: Industry vs. Inferiority General expansion of topic o Fidelity: Identify vs. Role Confusion Removal of redundant heading of psychosocial crisis Possibly add link to super ego Content seems sufficient o Love: Intimacy vs. Isolation Removal of redundant heading of psychosocial crisis General expansion of topic o Care: Generativity vs. Stagnation Removal of redundant psychosocial crisis General expansion o Wisdom: Ego integrity vs. Despair Fix age discrepancy between Care and Wisdom General expansion of topic Removal of redundant psychosocial crisis No citations present o Development of Freudian theory Seems sufficient enough o Value of the Theory Expansion as to the value to it had on psychology, as well as on society in general o Critique Some expansion needed
New Resources/References Franz, C., & White, K. (1985). Journal of personality. Individuation and attachment in personality development: Extending Erikson's theory, 52(2), 224-256.
Meacham, J., & Santilli, N. (1982). Interstage relationships in Erikson's theory: Identity and intimacy. Child Development, 53, 1461-1467.
Just a few minor edits, little things like indenting paragraphs . The table of the stages looks great! Make sure you take out "strike outs" and red font as it is against Wikipedia policy. I know several students have been edited by outside users for these minor edits, myself included. It looks like you have everything on your check list crossed off! Congratulations!