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I removed "In Western society, people whose gender appears masculine are sometimes ridiculed for exhibiting what the society regards as a woman's gender role^{[citation needed]}", originally the topic sentence of paragraph 5 in the Culture section, and replaced it with "The majority of Western society is not often tolerant of one gender fulfilling another role. In fact, homosexual communities are more tolerant of and do not complain about such behavior ^[1]" because, in my opinion, the original topic sentence was a bit unclear. My edited version seemed a bit clearer (please correct me if I'm wrong), and I provided a reference, albeit out of date.

Mabillin (talk) 22:22, 17 March 2012 (UTC)

Equal roles in homosexual relationships referencing: ^[2]

^ Bullough, Vern L. (1993). Crossdressing, Sex, and Gender (1st ed.). Univeristy of Pennsylvania Press. 1993. p. 390. ISBN 9780812214314. {{cite book}}: Unknown parameter |coauthors= ignored (|author= suggested) (help)
^ Dwyer, D. (2000). Interpersonal Relationships [e-book] (2nd ed.). Routledge. p. 104. ISBN 0203019717.

[Bullough-1] Bullough, Vern L. (1993). Crossdressing, Sex, and Gender (1st ed.). Univeristy of Pennsylvania Press. 1993. p. 390. ISBN 9780812214314. {{cite book}}: Unknown parameter |coauthors= ignored (|author= suggested) (help)

[Dwyer-2] Dwyer, D. (2000). Interpersonal Relationships [e-book] (2nd ed.). Routledge. p. 104. ISBN 0203019717.

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