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The Paleoclimatology article does contain a great deal of information that seems factual. However, it does not start to make insert citations until it begins the use of coral in the field. Also, almost every subsection requires the reader to jump to a main article. This make sense since paleoclimatology is a broad topic, but I do feel that more details could be provided in this article's subsections. A lot of people may just browsing this section for an overview and would not to read through multiple pages. It can also be interrupted as though the overall article is incomplete.