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Enter your proposed edits below here and above the "References" heading. Also enter the exact quote that you are paraphrasing from your source textbook or article. Let me know on my talk page when you're ready for me to look at your work. If you have any questions at all, ask on my talk page. Anthony (talk) 22:17, 21 November 2010 (UTC)

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1. Clozapine
Under History Section:
"Clozapine fell out of favor for more than a decade".....Because of the list of side effects and syndrome caused by Clozapine, early triallist was suggested to discarded and for these reason, the introduction of clozapine in Japan was never licensed.

This seems to contradict the article which says Clozapine was commercially released in 1972 and voluntarily withdrawn in 1975.

Hi anthony, I actually put it the wrong way. I just edited it as above. I hope its not contradicting this time. Thanks again for the feedback.

2.Antipsychotic
Under Controversy Section:
The discovery of Chlorpromazine's psychoactive effects in 1952 led to greatly reduced use of restraint, seclusion and sedation in the management of agitated patients, and also led to the development of antidepressants, anxiolytics and the majority of other drugs now used in the management of nervous conditions. Despite this, no Nobel Prize was ever awarded for this discovery, due to the discoverers describing its effects in quite different terms. In 1952, Henri Laborit described it as inducing indifference towards what was happening around them in nonpsychotic, nonmanic patients, and Jean Delay and Pierre Deniker described it as controlling manic or psychotic agitation. The former claimed to have discovered a treatment for agitation in anyone, and the latter team claimed to have discovered a treatment for psychotic illness.
3.Psychosis
The term psychotic refers to the presence of certain symptoms. However, the significant group of symptoms to which the term refers vary to some extent across the diagnostic categories of the DSM-IV. For instance, in schizophrenia "psychosis" refers to delusions and hallucinations, while in Psychotic Disorder due to a General Medical Condition and Subsantce-induced Psychotic Disorder "psychotic" refers either to delusions or to those people who suffer from hallucinations without insight. .

To make this claim you'll need to cite a source that makes the claim. Does the DSM-IV actually say "psychosis" means different things in the different disorders? Does one of your textbooks make that claim?

Hi Anthony, the DSM-IV manual says it DSM-IV manual under Schizophrenia.

4.Agoraphobia
In response to a traumatic event, anxiety may interrupt the formation of memories and disrupt the learning processes, resulting in dissociation. Depersonalization (a feeling of disconnection from one’s self) and derealisation (a feeling of disconnection from one's surroundings) are other dissociative methods of withdrawing from anxiety .

I have taken the liberty of rewriting some of the above because your expression was not very clear. I hope I haven't misunderstood your meaning. Please feel free to ignore my changes.

It is extremely important that you mention the page number/s from the text you are citing, like this: pp. 33-4 or similar, at the end of the citation, so other readers can check that you are not making it up.

Additional Proposed Edits

1.Anhedonia
Changing of mood are the most likely to observe in psychiatric disorder. They are the significant symptoms of depression but they can be easily seen in other psychiatric disorders during physical illness. In healthy people, changing mood is also prominent when encountering stressful events

2. Major depressive disorder (under epidemiology: prevalence)
Depressive disorder are most common in urban than in rural population and the prevalence is in groups with higher socioeconomic factors i.e. homeless people

3.Mood disorder (under epidemiology)
There are 20-30 percent per 1000 for men and 40-90 percent per 1000 for women that are frequently to develop of major depression in western countries whereas bipolar disorder is less common

4.Insomnia
To add list of eg in causing and comorbidities on mental health; dementia and excessive alcohol intake

5.Dementia
To add other disorder; Pick’s Disease, Multi-infarct Dementia and AIDS Dementia complex

6.Paranoid Psychosis
It is recognised that people with schizophrenia(paranoia) are frequently suffer from cognitive impairment that this impairment affects individual important of functional outcome such as procurement of social skills and employment . One research suggests that high social anxiety contributes the effects of higher paranoia of a person

7.Anger (under psychology and sociology section)
Violence and aggression are widespread phenomena and commonly occur in all cultures in society. In mentally ill people as violent, Barker (2003) stated that community often construe mental patients as one of an examples of antisocial conduct and hostility

8.Mania (under medication)
Antipsychotic drugs are also useful to treat for mania even though there was a dispute as to whether antipsychotics are specific treatment for mania or whether they contain the disorder until it determines to develop . However, this argument is still a circular one

9.Alcohol intoxication (under alcohol poisoning)
Consumes dangerous amount of alcohol, persistently can develop 2 syndrome; Memory blackouts and idiosyncratic intoxication or pathological drunkenness