User:Lisa Rosé - Business/sandbox

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Comment: Wikipedia is not for posting your personal autobiography, try using a social media channel. Dan arndt (talk) 01:52, 8 January 2025 (UTC)

My name is Lisa Rosé, a well-developed entrepreneur who has overcome many challenges along the journey to create my own LED business. I am of recent time of writing this page 38 years old.

I have always wanted to own a business, wishing upon it to the stars every night, but when I got older, I realized that instead of wishing I should put my foot down and start creating my dream.

Lisa's mom: I want to say that I believed in her, but I didn't really grow up with this type of technology, so I can't really say my faith was secure. The two things I did believe in, though, were her action and attitude. Whatever she wanted to do she would try at, sometimes not really getting anywhere except for acquiring some little skill that she would never use again -laughs-.

My business, LED CHANNEL, has recently took off due to my social media activity. This analysis took me to realize that I need to venture out more on these apps if I want my business to grow. In the past couple months, I have reached out to countless YouTubers and TikTokers in the categories of: Sports, gaming, and tech. After the first couple "collabs" I saw even more growth then when my videos on my page were gaining traction. -- Side note: I plan to update this page once a month, so please stay tuned to any new content.