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A FAMILY'S RIFT
A family's rift is a unpublished book created by a teenage boy. The book follows the story of two kids who are got up in a school massacre. Even though they manage to survive they find out that their family's are behind the massacre. Desperate for revenge they set out on a mission to end their family's plot before they target any other schools.
the book was written by a young teen called Liam Paton. He wrote the book when he was 15 years old after being inspired by a dream he had. He read his book to some friends and it received great comeback but liam threw it out as he didn't want it published and he didn't want his parents finding out.
PLOT: Two friends Liam Paton and Adam Lawrence have been friends since nursery and never leave each others side. Liam is a shy respectful guy while Adam is always itching for a fight. The two friends travel to Castlebrae High School. During break Liam suggest they talk to Caitlan stark, one of his close friends. When they meet her the school comes under attack by teenagers. Luckily Liam and Adam manage to hide but their friends are slaughtered and Caitlan is kidnapped by the teenagers.
After the two leave their hiding place in a old basement hidden by a fire exit door, they find the school ransacked, their friends dead and Caitlan missing. While walking through the school hallways, Liam notices a sheet of paper that Caitlan was holding before the attack. He discovers that Caitlan had written down some of the names of the attackers but dropped it when she was kidnapped. Adam notices that two of the names are the names of his best friend James and his brother Michael. Liam then notices one of the names is the name of his father John Paton. Horrified the two boys escape the school, but are stopped when the teenagers return for the note that Caitlan dropped. One of the teenagers attack liam but liam manages to subdue him. The two take him hostage and demands to know who he is working for. They are horrified when he tells them that he is working for their parents, who have hired him and the others to target schools across the country with the intention of hunting down members of the stark family. Liam, Who realizes he is talking about Caitlan's family releases him, telling him to tell their parents that if they want to find the family they will have to kill them first. The two boys then head to Mordun, the place where Caitlan family stays.
A few hours later the boys arrive at Mordun. Liam suggest they visit his friend Rren cross, one of his friends he met on Facebook. Adam is reluctant, believing that u cant trust people on Facebook that you haven't met before. Despite his worries they find Rren getting hassled by a few teenagers, who want to know were liam and Adam were. Liam and adam rescue Rren and they flee to a nearby park. Rren tells them he was doing some digging and found out that several teenagers who live in Mordun are working with their family's to hunt down the stark family. Liam reveals to Rren that they must find Caitlan stark, the girl who was kidnapped at the school massacre. Liam shows him the list that she dropped. Rren notices one of the names Dionne Forrest on the list. He tells them that dionne was one of his girlfriends and that she lives nearby. Liam, Adam and Rren set off for dionne's house.
Arriving at dionne's house they find it ransacked. Liam finds a notebook which reveals the location of where teenagers are holding caitlan. It also reveals that they are demanding ransom money in a attempt to track down caitlan's family. Liam leaves Rren and Adam( telling them to find dionne) and heads to the address. Arriving at the house liam discovers that the address was a decoy, As his mother anticipated that liam would come after caitlan. Liam then notices one of the teenagers who was at the school leaving a nearby flat. Determined to find caitlan, he follows the boy to a nearby house where he is meeting more of his friends. Before they reach the house, liam overhears him talking on the phone, expressing his fear that liam is in Mordun. Liam follows him until he reaches a house. When he enters the house liam receives a call from adam, he and Rren have found Dionne in a pool of blood with a note attached saying- we know you are here boys, Liam tells them to leave the house and go back to the park and that he will meet them shortly. Liam is suddenly attacked by the teenagers( who knew liam was following them). After a fight liam escapes them and races back to the park.
Returning to the park, Liam found Adam and Rren missing. Suddenly, Liam receives a call from caitlan's mother. She tells him that Adam and Rren were kidnapped by Liam's father and that they threatened to kill them and caitlan unless he surrendered. Desperate and vengeful Liam met caitlan's Boyfriend and asked him to help him find her and is friends. he agreed and suggested that they visit a nearby hospital were caitlan was submitted for a stab wound. They arrives at the hospital and finds the place guarded by police(As Liam's mother and father had informed the police that liam was stalking teenagers looking for caitlan). James distracts the cops by attacking a nearby guard, allowing liam to sneak in. Searching the hallways liam found caitlan alive but was being guarded by two guards. Liam distracted the guards before knocking them out. Liam carries caitlan to the front entrance and to James. the trio then escaped, but were pursued by police and members of the group looking for caitlan's family. Desperate to save caitlan , liam told them to go on while he deals with the police and teenagers. Grabbing a bottle of vodka liam poured it over a nearby bush and after caitlan and James rush through it, he sets fire to it stopping the police and teenagers.
Liam eventually meets up with caitlan and James. Caitlan explained that Adam and Rren were taking to two separate places( Adam was taking to Portobello, While Rren was taking to Niddre). Liam left caitlan and james and escaped Mordun and went to Niddre- to find Rren before finding adam. Just as liam is about to get on the bus Caitlan and james turn up at the bus stop. When liam asks why they are there they both reply: you help us in our hour of need, now its time they do the same. Together the trio set of for Niddre- unaware that they were being closely followed by a Assassin who is determined to end liam's hero mission once and for all........
A FAMILY'S RIFT 2: DARK SECRETS
A FAMILY'S RIFT 2: DARK SECRETS is an action- adventure book created by liam Paton. Like with the first book it is set in Edinburgh, Scotland and is a direct sequel to the first book. The unpublished book continues the story of Liam Paton along with Caitlan Stark and her boyfriend James as they head to Niddre to rescue Liam's friend Rren Cross- who was kidnapped in the first book by the people behind the school massacre, while along the way he discovers some dark secrets about caitlan that throws his life in mortal danger. The book is based on a dream liam had when he was 15 years old.
PLOT: Having Successfully escaped Mordun, Liam, Caitlan and James head off to Niddre to rescue Liam's friend Rren, who was kidnapped by liam's father. While on the bus the trio are attacked by an assassin who was following them secretly through the first book. The assassin kills the bus driver, forcing the bus crash head long into a house. They survive the crash and liam orders caitlan and james to get to Niddre while he deals with the assassin. After leaving caitlan and james, and after a lengthy chase liam is able to catch the assassin. Taking him back to Mordun, he demands to know why he is trying to kill him and the others. Liam soon wishes he hadn't, as the assassin reveals that he was hired by liam's very own friend caitlan. Liam kills the assassin then races to niddre to rejoin the pair.
Liam finds caitlan and james hiding out in a flat. Liam tells them that he killed the assassins but doesn't reveal what he said to him about caitlan. They head out to Niddre to locate Rren. Along the way some dark discoveries are made( with liam discovering two more school massacres taking place, and james discovering caitlan's lies). The pair confront caitlan and demands to know what she is up to. She reveals that she hired the assassin to prevent liam from killing her ex boyfriend, who is part of the group behind the massacres. Liam demands caitlan to take him to her ex boyfriend's house, which she hastily refuses. Liam leaves by himself, telling caitlan that if he finds her ex boyfriend he will kill him, and anyone who try's to stop him. Suddenly the house is attacked by a group of assassins. Liam is shot, james is killed and caitlan flees with the assassins.
Liam wakes up several hours later to find james dead, caitlan missing and the house ablaze. After retrieving Dionne's notebook and caitlan's list of names, he escapes the house and races after the assassins. Liam follows them to castlebrae high school where a meeting is taking place, and also where Rren is being held. Liam sneaks round to the back of the school to a back fire exit door that was being guarded by two teenagers. Unable to fight due to his gunshot wound liam creates a distraction and enters the school. He makes his way to the toilets where he is forced to hide when caitlan and her ex boyfriend walk in. He overhears caitlan telling him that liam's body was never found at the house and that she was worried he was coming for her. Caitlan left but before her ex boyfriend could leave, Liam attacked him and threatened to kill him unless he took him to Rren. He complied and lied to caitlan that he was going to the back of the school to meet some friends for a smoke. With the stage set liam killed the boy and retrieved Rren, only to be found by caitlan, along with liam's parents. They demanded that liam surrender to them and to kill Rren. Liam refuses and they reveal That adam was in the school. Sitting him down in front of him they threatened to kill him unless liam kills Rren and surrender. From here the book splits into 3 possible endings.
ENDING 1: Liam surrenders and is forced to kill Rren, but vows revenge. While being escorted to the front of the school, Liam kills his captors, shoots caitlan, Sets fire to the school and rescues adam. Liam lets caitlan live, vowing to return to kill her one day when the time is right. Him and adam then flee Niddre and into hiding.
ENDING 2: Liam refuses to surrender and adam is killed by caitlan. Liam and Rren are then arrested and taken to the front of the school to be executed. Before they can be executed, caitlan's brother turns up and rescues liam and Rren. The trio Shoot caitlan and escape the school with the help of liam's brother Jordan Paton. The four then kill liam and jordan's mother and flee the school and into hiding, with liam remarking that their troubles were only just beginning.
ENDING 3: Liam activates a flash bang which distracts caitlan and the others before starting a fire. In the confusion liam rescues both adam and Rren and flees the school. The trio are attacked by assassins but manage to escape them. Liam tells them they can't return to Mordun as that is the first place they would look for them. Liam then takes them to a remote hideout in the outskirts of Gilmerton where they hide Dionne's diary in a basement and go into hiding. Back at the school caitlan and the others order a search party for liam and the others.
After one of the endings finish the book returns to the perspective of caitlan at the school. Having been wounded during liam's escape, caitlan orders a search party to find him. Caitlan then kills liam's parents, claiming control over the group of teenagers. During a speech at castlebrae caitlan tells a reporter that liam murdered his own parent's in an attempt to keep his crimes a secret. No matter what ending happens the police start a worldwide search for liam and his friends with caitlan remarking, JUDGEMENT DAY IS COMING.
A FAMILY'S RIFT 3: JUDGEMENT DAY
A FAMILY'S RIFT 3: JUDGEMENT DAY is an action/adventure book written by liam Paton. It is the third book in the series and continues the story of liam paton and his friends Rren cross and adam lawrence as they desperately try to avoid the police while attempting to track down traitor caitlan stark and end the school massacres once and for all. Since there was three endings in the second book the third installment follows on from when liam managed to activate a flash bang an rescue both his friends from caitlan. As with the other books, The story is set in Edinburgh, Scotland and follows the same storyline as the others. Liam stated that this was the final book in the trilogy but he later said he has 2 more books in production that will rap up the series.
PLOT: 6 weeks after escaping niddre liam, adam and rren are still in hiding on the outskirts of Gilmerton. With police, caitlan and their friends looking for them the trio are forced to sneak around and avoid being seen by anyone. Liam leaves the house to collect some food from a friend of his thomas harris. While retrieving the food liam notices a girl getting hassled by some of the teenagers who were looking for them. After they left liam checked up on her to see if she was OK. She revealed herself to be caitlan's sister who was Rumored to have died in a car accident. She tells him that caitlan has launched a worldwide search for him and is killing anyone who gets in her way. Liam was attacked by some teenagers but managed to kill 2 of them as the rest fled. Liam then took her back to his hideout for safety.
2 months later liam discovers that caitlan has taking hold of niddre, Portobello and Mordun in her search for liam. Liam finally decides that the time has come to fight back against caitlan and retake their town. Liam, adam, Rren, caitlan's brother and sister, along with liam's brother Jordan all set out for Mordun to end caitlan's plot once and for all. Arriving in Mordun, Liam and Adam searched for caitlan's parents while the rest search for caitlan and her friends. Liam instead found caitlan harassing kids for the location of liam and his friends. Liam kills caitlan's new boyfriend and her best friend but caitlan escapes. Liam chases her across Mordun and eventually captures her. He informs adam and the others of the capture and they all take her back to the hideout. They demand answers for caitlan's betrayal but caitlan refuses to confess. She tells them that she murdered liam's parents and that she framed him for the crimes. In a rage liam struggles to decide if he should kill caitlan for her lies and treachery or use her to find the remaining members of the school massacres. He doesn't get choice as several police cars arrive at the hideout(having plotted to have caitlan kidnapped then follow liam to the hideout). Liam then makes the hardest decision of his life, kill caitlan for her treachery or to hand her over to the police with the evidence of her crimes( having taped her confession to killing his parents and framing him). The book then splits into two sections.
SECTION 1: As the police close in on the hideout Liam gives in to his rage and executes caitlan in cold blood by shooting her in the head. The group then plot escape. With police everywhere liam sets fire to the hideout and launches an attack on the police. The group hijack 3 police cars and make their escape(liam and Rren in one, Caitlan's brother and sister in another and adam and Jordan in the last). They race back to niddre and launch a full scale assault on niddre, killing police officers and gang members that stand in their way. Liam breaks into caitlan's old house and retrieves some files with a massive name inscribed in blood over it. Liam immediately recognizes the name that belongs to liam's friend thomas harris. Liam finally realizes that thomas was behind the school massacre, receiving help from liam's parents. It is also revealed that they never intended to hunt down caitlan's family and that it was a trap to lure liam into the fight. Suddenly the group are viciously attacked by gang members. As they desperately try to escape the building explodes, trapping liam, adam and caitlan's sister. As they try to escape thomas arrives and kills jordan and Rren then flees with dionne's diary, Leaving liam and his remaining friends fighting for their lives......
SECTION 2: As the police close in on him and his friends, Liam hands caitlan over to the police and gives them the recorder that taped her confession. The police apologize for swallowing caitlan's lies and offer to take liam to the location of the remaining gang members. Liam stuns everyone(including caitlan) by saying he doesn't want them found and that he wants them to hand themselves in. The police and the group were suddenly attacked by the gang members having recieved a distress call from caitlan while liam was chasing her. The police are killed and thomas reveals himself to be the mastermind behind the massacres and that he used caitlan to get liam involved, as liam and caitlan were close friends. Thomas frees caitlan and the pair tell liam that his days of being a hero are over. After kidnapping most of his friends, Caitlan shoots liam, adam and Rren and throws their body's back into the hideout and sets it ablaze, leaving them to burn alive, and the fates of his friend unknown...
A FAMILY'S RIFT 4: THE FINAL REVOLUTION PART 1
A FAMILY'S RIFT 4: THE FINAL REVOLUTION PART 1 is an action/adventure book written by liam paton. It is the fourth book in the series and the first part in the epic finale. The book like the others is unpublished and the story is set in 2013 Edinburgh, Scotland and continues the story of liam paton, as he and is last remaining friends try to survive the events of the last film and to stop the school massacres from continuing. since the previous book had two sections the book follows on from when liam spared caitlan and handed her to the police, only to be shot along with his friends adam and rren and trapped in a burning building, with the rest of his friends kidnapped by caitlan and thomas.
PLOT: With the hideout burning around them liam wakes up after losing consciousness. He finds adam and rren unconscious and caitlan's brother and sister, along with his brother jordan missing. Luckily liam rescues adam and rren and the trio escape to safety. They are taken to the royal infirmary for treatment. While in the hospital thomas and caitlan, along with caitlan's presumed dead boyfriend james arrives at the hospital and begin slaughtering everyone. Liam realizes that james faked his death as a plan to get liam to step up his campaign to kill caitlan. In a rage, and despite being injured liam, adam and rren fought back against trio. After a deadly shootout, chase and fight, liam manages to kill james and injure caitlan, who barley escapes with thomas. The trio then discharge themselves from hospital and begin looking for their friends who were kidnapped by caitlan and thomas.
They returned to Niddre and began searching for caitlan. After killing several teenagers, the trio stole their guns and assaulted castlebrae high school. Infiltrating the school the trio found the place empty, showing that caitlan fled quickly. Liam finds a camera in a classroom and reviews it. The video shows caitlan apologizing for what she has put him through and that she wanted to go to a better place. Suddenly liam told adam and rren to check the basement, the same place that liam and adam hid during the massacre. In a flashback Liam recalls caitlan referred the basement to a better place and that if she did anything wrong or was scared she would seek shelter there. And as suspected liam found caitlan hiding in the basement, covered in blood. Caitlan explains that thomas is cutting his ties with everyone and attempted to execute her. She killed some of his friends and escaped. Liam asks caitlan were thomas was hiding both their family's( caitlan's brother and sister, along with liam's brother). She said that they were locked in the computing department and awaiting transport to portobello. With caitlan's help, liam, adam and rren rescued the trio and all made their escape.
Escaping back to Mordun, caitlan explained that she wanted to see her family before they left to find charlie nisbet, one of liam's close friend and an arms dealer named lee whitney. The group paid a visit to caitlan's house and discovered that caitlan's family had walked out on her, having been sick of the way she was acting and worried for their life. A devastated caitlan found her diary which she was writing during the school massacres. Caitlan tells liam that he must read her diary when he gets the chance, so he could understand why she did what she did. The group then decide to settle at caitlan's house, using it as a headquarters. While checking caitlan's room liam found several love poems and songs that caitlan had created for her former boyfriend james( who liam killed at the royal infirmary when he tried to kill him). Caitlan told him that she would have done the same if she was going to be killed. Over the next few months the group kill several workers who work for thomas, crippling his alliance with several people. Liam acquired weapons and food from lee and charlie from time to time.
The book then shifts 6 months later. While watching T.V liam, caitlan discover that Thomas's dad had taken over the police force and has ordered the death sentence on liam and his friends. Liam decided that the time was now to act. Leaving on his own, liam traveled to portobello and assassinated Thomas's dad inside his own office. Liam was then chased back to Mordun but eventually outran them and returned to caitlan's house. While having dinner caitlan heard a noise outside and went to the living room to check it out. Suddenly a bullet came smashing through the window, hitting caitlan in the neck. Horrified liam chased the assassin and eventually tackled him in a nearby park. Liam was horrified to discover it was his best friend johnny Berwick, believing liam was working with thomas and caitlan. Unable to convince him liam killed him and ran back to the house. He discovered caitlan had died as soon as he left. Devastated liam vowed revenge by killing thomas once and for all and together with his friends set off for niddre one final time.....
A FAMILY'S RIFT 5: THE FINAL REVOLUTION PART 2
A FAMILY'S RIFT 5: THE FINAL REVOLUTION PART 2 is an action/adventure book created by liam paton. The book is the fifth and final book in the series, concluding the story of liam paton as he leads a final revolution against thomas harris, the person behind the school massacres. As with the other books it is unpublished and set in 2013 Edinburgh, Scotland. The book was confirmed by liam as the last in the mordern series, but has announced a series of prequels that will continue the series.
PLOT: The book starts in niddre, with the town engulfed in flames. Adam and Rren appear and frantically call an ambulance for liam, who is unconscious and bleeding. An ambulance takes them to the royal infirmary, Where it is revealed that he is in a coma after receiving a vicious blow to the head. The police arrive and ask the group( consisting of Adam, Rren, Caitlan's brother and sister, Liam's brother jordan and liam's friends charlie and lee~) what happened to liam, and also demand to know why niddre is up in flames. The book then goes to the perspective of liam in his coma, as he recalls the events that led to this.
The book then flashes back 3 months. Liam and the group had entered niddre following caitlan's death, and had set up camp in an abandoned house. The group began making plans to rid niddre of thomas once and for all, and to put an end to the school massacres. Liam was haunted by the image of caitlan's death, as he was the only other person in the room when she was shot. He had entered a catatonic state, refusing to talk to any of his friends, and was being haunted by caitlan's ghost. The group then discovered that thomas was becoming paranoid after hearing from a friend that liam killed the assassin he sent to kill kill caitlan. Liam, still refusing to speak, showed the group a list of names that caitlan wrote during the castlebrae massacre. Liam had been killing them all one by one( telling his friends that they were drug dealers supplying thomas with guns and drugs). One last name was on the sheet who was still alive, Liam's half-brother john paton.
The group then went to bed for the night. Liam, who couldn't sleep stayed up and read the diary that caitlan gave him a few months before she died. It reveals that thomas told her that he murdered her sister and covered up by making it look like a car accident. he then read that caitlan was forced to get liam involved, as thomas had a grudge against him. Caitlan wrote at the back of the diary that she was relieved when she heard that liam's body was never found at the three places where he was nearly killed( castlebrae, the flat where james faked his death and the hideout where they went into hiding after being shot and locked in the burning building). She also reveals that she shot liam and his friends because she was told that he was responsible for her sister's apparent death, and later explained that she was devastated when she found out it was a lie, having believed that she had killed liam for nothing. Liam stops reading and thinks, and is greeted by caitlan's ghost. She tells him that she will always be thee to help him and that she wants liam to watch over her family, but liam didn't acknowledge her ghost, refusing to speak to her. Liam then burned caitlan's diary and left the house.
The next day the group awoke and, after finding caitlan's diary burned, they went looking for liam. They found him sitting on a park bench, staring at a tree where he and caitlan hanged out. They asked him what was wrong but he didn't reply. Instead he showed them an address that belonged to thomas's friend and cousin lauren elliot. Liam and adam broke into the house and cornered lauren. Adam demanded to know were thomas was but she started slagging of their deceased friend caitlan. Liam grabs a knife and points it to her throat. Adam told her that liam was in a catatonic state and that he wouldn't talk and demanded that she tell them were thomas was. Lauren once again slagged off caitlan, saying that she was a tart and that she slept around with boys to get what she wants. Liam then hears lauren's phone buzz. Answering it he found out it was thomas who, believing lauren was listening to her to meet him and his group at castlebrae for a final meeting. Liam forced lauren to say she would be there then hanged up the phone. Liam then killed lauren and headed to castlebrae.
Arriving at castlebrae Liam and his friends entered castlebrae and proceeded to kill everyone on their way to thomas. Liam cornered thomas alone. And for the first time in the book spoke. When thomas slagged the fact that liam was only doing this for caitlan liam replied' I am doing this for myself'. After a horrifying showdown, Liam stabbed thomas in the heart and told him he would see him in hell. Thomas however had one final trick. Before dying he activated a switch that activated bombs placed all around niddre. After he dies and with niddre up in flames liam tried to escape. But before he could liam was hit in the back of the head by a pole. Before slipping into a coma, liam threw the knife at the assassin and killed him. Adam and rren race to liam's aid and call an ambulance, just like the beginning of the book. He was then taken to hospital and was confirmed to be in a coma.
Back in the present liam had awaken from his coma and saw his friends standing over him. After a long chat they were asked to leave and let liam rest. A few hours later liam saw caitlan's ghost standing at the bottom of his bed. She asked liam why he burned her diary. Liam smiled and said: i wanted to be the only one to know how sorry she was. She then asked him if it was worth killing thomas for revenge. Liam said it was as long as they got closure. Suddenly the last remaining member of the massacres, Liam's half brother john turned up. He told liam that his time was up and tried to switch of his life support machine. Before he could however liam revealed a gun and shot him in the head, saying: that was for caitlan and everyone else that died at your hands you bastard. The doctor's arrived and asked what happened, to which liam replied: I finally achieved what i was born for. The book ends with liam smiling at caitlan's ghost, who was sitting at the bottom of the bed.