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User:Lavendergardener/Ye College Inn/Janekraaijvanger Peer Review

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Whose work are you reviewing?

Lavendergardener

Link to draft you're reviewing
https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Ye_College_Inn&diff=1253472745&oldid=1219130420
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Ye College Inn

Evaluate the drafted changes

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Lead:

  • The lead is great and edited to be much more understandable in terms of the location itself, I also liked that you shifted the part about the developer to the following paragraph

Content

  • Overall I thought your content was really great and focused on the facts and the history of the building, the only suggestion I would think about is adding the Charles Cowen paragraph to the "history" section. I am a little confused what information you have added and if you added that entire table of information
  • The content is obviously up to date as you went straight to the source by using their records. I think it would be smart to maybe add a section around "what its like now" just to make the whole thing flow better

Tone:

  • The tone is great and extremely informative with a great wikipedia voice / no bias could have been easy to make it into a "ad" for the inn but you made it clear not too.
  • Such a special historical spot and it was really cool to learn more

Sources:

  • I think it would be great if you were able to add more sources but I understand that is tricky due to the topic,
  • Your use of their records was extremely beneficial and not alot of articles on wiki are able to do so

Organization:

  • already touched on it a little but I think that if you were to break it up more sectionally it would make the entire page that much stronger. Even though it isn't that long of a page it makes a huge difference for the reader experience.

Overall impressions:

  • So impressive and you clearly spent a lot of time on this and it shows. A few basic fixes and I think you will be all good to go! Great work