User:Lavendergardener/Ye College Inn/Janekraaijvanger Peer Review
Peer review
Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects: LeadGuiding questions:
ContentGuiding questions:
Tone and BalanceGuiding questions:
Sources and ReferencesGuiding questions:
OrganizationGuiding questions:
Images and MediaGuiding questions: If your peer added images or media
For New Articles OnlyIf the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
Overall impressionsGuiding questions:
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.
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General info
[edit]- Whose work are you reviewing?
Lavendergardener
- Link to draft you're reviewing
- https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Ye_College_Inn&diff=1253472745&oldid=1219130420
- Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
- Ye College Inn
Evaluate the drafted changes
[edit]Lead:
- The lead is great and edited to be much more understandable in terms of the location itself, I also liked that you shifted the part about the developer to the following paragraph
Content
- Overall I thought your content was really great and focused on the facts and the history of the building, the only suggestion I would think about is adding the Charles Cowen paragraph to the "history" section. I am a little confused what information you have added and if you added that entire table of information
- The content is obviously up to date as you went straight to the source by using their records. I think it would be smart to maybe add a section around "what its like now" just to make the whole thing flow better
Tone:
- The tone is great and extremely informative with a great wikipedia voice / no bias could have been easy to make it into a "ad" for the inn but you made it clear not too.
- Such a special historical spot and it was really cool to learn more
Sources:
- I think it would be great if you were able to add more sources but I understand that is tricky due to the topic,
- Your use of their records was extremely beneficial and not alot of articles on wiki are able to do so
Organization:
- already touched on it a little but I think that if you were to break it up more sectionally it would make the entire page that much stronger. Even though it isn't that long of a page it makes a huge difference for the reader experience.
Overall impressions:
- So impressive and you clearly spent a lot of time on this and it shows. A few basic fixes and I think you will be all good to go! Great work