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Industry 4.0 is a name for the current trend of automation and data exchange in manufacturing technologies. It includes cyber-physical systems, the Internet of things, cloud computing[1][2][3][4] and cognitive computing.
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[edit]1. Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you?
Everything in the article is related to the topic of the article. However, with regard to the extension of Industry 4.0, the article only introduces "Role of big data and analytics", and other related knowledge is not mentioned.
2. Check a few citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article?
The writer checked reference 17 (Tec.News : 26" (PDF). Harting.com. Retrieved 2016-11-30), the link to the site shows "404 did not find" which is out of date and doesn't work. The reference 19 and reference 20 support the claim in section Role of big data and analytics, however the claim is not clear enough.
3. Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that could be added?
In the reference section, the reference 10 is named "You Have Reached a 404 Page". 22 September 2013 – via Slate. More references and related knowledge should be added. For example, topic Industry upgrade and Smart factory should be add under the Industry 4.0 topic.
- ^ Hermann, Pentek, Otto, 2016: Design Principles for Industrie 4.0 Scenarios, accessed on 4 May 2016
- ^ Jürgen Jasperneite:Was hinter Begriffen wie Industrie 4.0 steckt in Computer & Automation, 19 December 2012 accessed on 23 December 2012
- ^ Kagermann, H., W. Wahlster and J. Helbig, eds., 2013: Recommendations for implementing the strategic initiative Industrie 4.0: Final report of the Industrie 4.0 Working Group
- ^ Heiner Lasi, Hans-Georg Kemper, Peter Fettke, Thomas Feld, Michael Hoffmann: Industry 4.0. In: Business & Information Systems Engineering 4 (6), pp. 239-242