User:LamirM/sandbox

Here is the link to the article that I critiqued: Physical exercise

*My first edit is within the history section of the article. I restructured the opening statement relating to Marcus Cicero in order to give the reader more context on who he actually is and the significance of how he relates to the valuing of exercise throughout history. I added a citation near the description of Marcus Cicero labeled, "152" in order to provide the reader with an additional information link describing his role in history.

*My second edit is also within the history section of the article. I added a sentence directly after the sentence quoting Marcus Cicero as a means of providing the reader with more information on how exercise was valued within the history of the world. I also added a citation labeled "154" that links to an article titled, "The History of Fitness" on www.unm.edu. The article on this site is written by experts with advanced knowledge in the topic field.

*My third edit is also in the history section. I added information pertaining to exercise in the 19th century in order to provide the reader with a more diverse timeline on how exercise has played a role in history. I also added a citation labeled, "155" that links to an article called, "Physical Culture." The article resides in Encyclopedia Britannica which is an extremely reliable source.