User:LGUNN22
Potential Articles
[edit]*Theory of impetus One of this article's sections contains too many run-on sentences, which may cause confusion for the reader.
*2002 Argentinian riots This article contains several typos and problems with its word choices (wrong verbs, for example).
*List of radio stations in Africa The formatting of this article is less than ideal, with its long list of countries not formatted in Wikipedia's preferred way.
*Display resolution This article is excessively wordy and is tagged as being too repetitive.
*Aftermath of World War I One of this article's sections is written too much like an essay.
Organizational History
[edit]Theory of Impetus
[edit]- Significant editors: Merlinme, Logicus, Jagged 85
- Jagged 85 added several paragraphs of information
- Logicus added information and began dividing it into specialized sections. One of the version's of the article defines important terms that are not defined in the current article I have been working with.
Display resolutions
[edit]- Significant editors: Makyen, Avieshek, Dholcome
- Separation of Computer monitors subsection into 2000s and 2010s occurred in 2016 (still left in Current Standards)
- Previous suggestion that the article Graphics display resolution be merged into Display Resolutions
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