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Article Evaluation Tim Burton's The Nightmare Before Christmas Nightmare Before Christmas is an original Tim Burton story that was written in 1982 that was originally written as a poem and released as a Touchstone Pictures movie in 1993. During the time, Burton was working at the Walt Disney Feature Animation as an animator when he wrote the story Nightmare Before Christmas. Burton was fascinated with holidays where his writing for Nightmare Before Christmas was influenced from classic Christmas stories with a twist of ghouls and monsters. Due to Burton's dark and gloomy imagination, Disney productions were hesitant to produce his story as a movie, rather considered turning into a short film and released the movie through Touchstone Pictures. Eventually Disney got around to creating this movie but throughout the years of going back and forth between his other movies, he was influenced by many other animators and created a musical. The story takes place in a fantasy land called Halloween Town that has monsters living together and is led by a skeleton that goes by the name of Jack Skeleton or his nickname the Pumpkin King. Jack stumbles upon a new world which was Christmas Town and Jack tries to take over the Christmas holiday with the help of his followers. Nightmare Before Christmas became a big hit from audience that ranged from little kids to adults. Critics gave it a high 94% rating on Rotten Tomatoes. In 2006, Walt Disney Pictures re-released the movie as a Disney Digital 3-D format. Nightmare Before Christmas made a total of $75 million gross due to the new edits and releases throughout the years. Burton wanted to keep the purity of this movie and didn’t want to ruin in by creating a sequel. Wiki Evaluation The article is highly informative with contents with an over view of the plot, a timeline of when Burton produced the film with Touchstone Pictures in 1993, then re-released as a Disney film in 2006. Below the Wikipedia page was listed over 50+ references stating the date when contributing to the article. The references were edited from the year the movie was released in 1993 and are up to date too current time. There are various links to read more about the subject. The external links listed at the end of the article state more in depth information about the subject. The content in this article are well organized and straight forward.
Sun Tanning Sun tanning is described as darkening or tanning the skin darker than the skin’s natural complexion. There are various ways of tanning which includes exposure to ultraviolet (UV) radiation from direct sunlight, chemical used process that is added on top of the skin, resulting in darkening the skin, and tanning lamps that is described to be an indoor tanning bed and have no need of direct sunlight for this process. Minimum exposure in direct sunlight creates a natural production of melanin and vitamin D by the body which protects the body by absorbing ultraviolet radiation. Too much exposure or over excessive tanning to the body will result in darkening the skin, sun burns, accelerated aging of the skin, and potential skin cancer in the future. There are two types of UV exposure: first is UVA radiation which is a oxidative stress oxidizing existing melanin in the body creating a darker melanin. UVA exposure does not lead to an increase of melanin nor does it protect again sun damage like sun burns or skin cancer. He second UV process is UVB which is an increase of melanin due to the body’s exposure from UV radiation. Skin’s darkening color due to the UV radiation are not permanent, but can last up to week or even months. Genetics play a big role of how much your skin reacts to direct sunlight. Those with a lighter complexion tend to burn more compared to those with more of a medium or even dark complexion due to the melanin in the body. Over exposure to UV radiation is known to cause sun burns, faster aging to the skin, mutate DNA, and in worst cases, can result in skin cancer. Wiki Evaluation The article has an informative over view of what sun tanning and is and the various different forms of tanning. The article also states the different types of UV radiation rays and how the radiation effects the body’s skin and immune system. The article also lists the different behavior of different skin complexion that is exposed to direct contact of the sun. There is an overview of the health aspects caused by overexposure of UV radiation. Towards the bottom of the page is a cultural history that gets in depth of how darkening of the skin became a fashion trend throughout different centuries. Towards the end of the article, there are about 50 different references that had contributed to this article. There is also a list of internal links that get more in depth of the research of UV radiation
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