User:Kfyohan

Bio

About me

My name is Yohan Lee, I go to Henry M Jackson high school and Everett Community college. Some of my hobbies are tennis and weightlifting. Tennis can increase aerobic capacities, lower resting heart rate, lower blood pressure, and lower overall body fat. Weightlifting has been a part of my life for a little more than a year now, I have progressed more than I could imagine. In an effort to achieve my dream physique, I don't see myself quitting any time soon. The community around weightlifting was very positive and upbringing for me, they motivated me to achieve more than I envisioned and created a positive environment for me to grow in.

My Wikipedia interests

If I'm active on Wikipedia in the future, some of my possible interests would probably be tennis or weightlifting related events.

Article Evaluation

Tennis has been involved in my life for many years, the basic skills and techniques of the game have become very familiar and acquainted to me. But once in a while, I would see people on TV playing tennis with wheelchairs and different rules. To satisfy my curiosity, I decided to look up all of the different versions of tennis matches. I visited the Types of tennis match article on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: Are the citations as current as possible, is anything left out of the article that should be there, and if some viewpoints are over-represented or under-represented.

Due to new information being discovered every day, up-to-date citations are a must when creating articles online. The article under evaluation only uses five citations and multiple references to other articles. While the five citations are all recently up to date, some of the referenced articles use citations that are older than 7 years ago.

Providing enough information and not having anything left out is crucial for a well-developed article. This article briefly covers wheelchair tennis, while most of the other types of tennis have detailed explanations and sources. It doesn't provide enough information for the reader to learn from.

The viewpoints of all parties should be represented to create an unbiased article. This article ignores the viewpoint of tennis coaches in the "Mini-Tennis" section, for it generalizes the use of mini tennis and never once giving evidence from a professional source.

This article does a great job on covering the types of tennis that are more well known. But for the less well-known types of tennis, it provides limited information, unequal representation of viewpoints, and contains citations that weren't up to date. This can result in the bias or misunderstanding of certain types of tennis, and create unequal representation for those apart of that community.