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13 Grandmothers Review

After reading the article on the 13 Grandmothers, the biggest thing I notice is how short it is. There are several things I was left wanting to know more about, such as; when and how they got started, and more information on where have visited and what they have done. It also would be nice to have pictures of each grandmother. Other than that, I wasn't bothered by anything else. As I continued I was pleasantly surprised to find that almost all of the information had citations to back it up. There were also a pretty good variety of sources with some books, websites, newspapers, and magazines. The links worked so I followed it on a few citations and didn't see anything that I saw as plagiarism. There were a few websites and sources that seemed from their point of view, but I think it was helpful in understanding who they are. Overall it wasn't too bad, but I look forward to finding more information to add to better represent the 13 Grandmothers.

2/28/2017 - 13 Grandmothers new citation

After reading this article the reader is left asking about some details that are missing. As I searched for another good source for this article I found that it was a lot harder to find information. I was looking for more general information on how the Grandmothers first began as a group, but I did come across some additional information on how they travel . It briefly talks about the grandmothers and how you can give them support. It said that they travel only by donations to meet together. However, I did feel that this online magazine was biased in promoting the adoption and support of the grandmothers. Therefore, I am not sure if we would use it for any more information other than the fact of how they travel.