User:Katpatt
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Jack Black
[edit]- There are inconsistent subheadings (one section has subheadings while all the rest do not).
- There are several copyediting/grammar errors throughout
- There is a need for improved citations
Christmas in Russia
[edit]- There are no sections for important themes like ‘history’ or ‘celebrations.’
- There doesn’t seem to be a main focus, and there aren’t any subheadings.
- Copyediting is needed, especially in the introduction.
