User:Jamesoneric/sandbox
Article: Quaternary Glaciation
Notes:
- Wording could be cleaned up; several instances of demonstrative pronoun usage which call for more descriptive language.
- Under the “Effects” heading, several claims are made (specifically regarding lakes) which are not backed up by a citation. Although the information may be accurate, it would be more powerful if backed up by a reliable source
- Link 7 does not lead to a specific reference
- Link 13 does not lead to a specific reference
- Link 16 does not lead to a specific reference
- Most of the references were accurate and led to reliable, unbiased sources
- The article is generally well-written and conveys the required information without going overboard or losing its neutral tone. It does a good job of covering all of the causes and effects in detail.
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