User:JMillerEco/sandbox

Assignment One:

One major thing wrong with this article is that most of the "Indirect impacts of climate change" lacks citations. A lot of claims are made in the section that does not have references to back them up. On the Talk page, I see both supportive comments and constructive criticisms. I see value in both of these because they both encourage others to continue editing this article to make it as good as it can be. Additionally, the last sentence of this section doesn't seem necessary. There is no citation backing up this claim, and it is clear that climate change has many indirect impacts based on the previous information in the section. I decided to remove this sentence and leave an edit summary.

Assignment Two:

I edited the "Indirect impact of climate change" article. I also edited the "Environmental impact of pig farming" article. In this article, there was one sentence that didn't seem entirely neutral, but more importantly, did not cite a source. For the claim they made, proper citation is necessary. I also made a small edit to the topic sentence of a sentence because it seemed too informal.

Assignment Three:

I decided to add an indirect impact of climate change in that article. I found an article about river flood plains in Europe that are being reduced as a result of increased temperatures and decreased precipitation from climate change.