User:Iderita/sandbox
Article Evaluation
The Justin Bieber article gives a lot of info about his background, how/ who he was founded by, his awards, his situations with the law, and albums he has created. They give well sources on how they got the information. The removal people made was from the early life section because it was al over the place. It talked about the beginning of his career, it is only suppose to talk about his early life, before the career started.
The Steve Jobs article talks about everything he has done and his whole life. There are a lot of citations and they explain what each word means by being able to click on a certain word and it brings you to its meaning which is very helpful in my opinion. There are a lot of changes though somebody made as of march 2017 wihc is a bag thing. Also people questioned the spelling of his name, "Stevin" or Steven."
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