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Draft: Impaakt Submission declined on 17 August 2021 by HitroMilanese (talk).[edit]Hi, Thank you very much for reviewing my work and for your help. I really appreciate it. I am part of the Impaakt community and I was searching for Impaakt on Wikipedia. Since I could not find an article about the platform I thought that initiating one could be interesting for my personal experience, and because Impaakt and Wikipedia work on the same model. Moreover, I hoped that more experienced Wikipedian would contribute to my article. While searching about Impaakt, I found this page: https://fr.wikipedia.org/wiki/Impak_Finance about a similar company. However, I struggle to understand how it was possible that this article was published: (https://fr.wikipedia.org/wiki/Impak_Finance) and that mine (Draft:Impaakt) was rejected. In fact, both articles look quite similar. Do you know the reason? Would you have any additional advices to help me get my first article published on Wikipedia? Is there a way for me to get contributions from experienced Wikipedians on my Draft:Impaakt ? Once again, thank you very much for your help and your time. Best-
Draft:Alain Guélis[edit]Bonjour Hitro Milanese, vous avez refusé mon article sur Alain Guélis musicien compositeur, vous avez certainement des raisons tout a fait louables et je ne demande qu'a recevoir vos conseils car j'ai du mal, toutefois vous indiquez qu'il est potentiellement notable--AMPYTRION (talk) 09:59, 19 August 2021 (UTC), effectivement j'ai pris des références dans la page que vous donnez en réduisant énormément et en essayantle plus possible et rester neutre et de réduire toute orientation publicitaire, mais pas assez sans doute; que préconisez vous pour rende l'article acceptable ? j'ai trouvé de nombreuses sources et fiches d'autorité publiques, j'avais supprimé les liens youtube auparavant; faut il changer l'introduction, faut il y mettre des liens ? j'attends vos conseils avec plaisir car un peu perdue.; --AMPYTRION (talk) 09:59, 19 August 2021 (UTC)
Hello Hitro Milanese, Thank you very much for your comments and advice that I followed, I read the wiki links that you suggested to me and I actually saw the press links 2 Figaro reviews (1 and 19 and concertonet.com on the website of the 'artist) I also found in his page listening to videos that I linked to TV shows from National channels or very young, he is invited to perform his piano music alongside guests like the Bee Gees, Simone Signoret or the Eagles as well as in other programs alongside Dalida star at the time which seems interesting to me, even if her register remains obviously totally classical music; I also found various concerts in Japan Suntory Hall and France Th champs élysées, salle gaveau, or Auditorium du Louvre and also one of his film scores appears at the Cannes Film Festival 2021 (4), it is also mentioned in a nomenclature of works for piano and orchestra by musicology professor in the USA Dr Allan Bo (link 2) so perhaps is it potentially sufficiently notable? should all these links be inserted or is it too much? you told me about a reviewer who would decide whether or not the article was eligible, if I resubmit it, will it be directed to this potential reviewer? and especially before, do you see important modifications to make ... thank you again for your invaluable help. AMPYTRION (talk) 17:27, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
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Thank you very much hitro milanese for your new remarks and for installing the "content" window and the famous {modify code} which I was quite unable to understand the process. In two words, how do I do it and if I want to add titles or sections? If not, you tell me that I need more development in the text, I will try to follow your precious advice by expanding some paragraphs; for example by creating a paragraph "about his music" for example, you will give me your opinion. You tell me that it is better to talk about the important works than to quote everything because there are many; I agree but the only problem is how to define, in relation to the artist, those which are the most notable; for the piano where there are more than 60 pieces, I don't know which ones to choose? but for example, instead of quoting in detail each piece for piano those which form a group, I summarised them by 4 studies, 3 poetic visions, 2 poetic impressions, 4 evocations or 5 fantasies, which will greatly reduce the "catalogue" effect For the sources you told me that the sources coming from the artist's site are not considered valid, I understand this objection perfectly but what poses a problem for me is that for the articles of the Figaro which are important sources you had underlined, I looked at them and they are only found on their site because one finds few on the net, old articles from the Figaro, and finally the videos of TV shows such as the RDV du dimanche by M. Drucker where he interprets his music in a very important program in France at the time and very watched devoted also to the Bee gees, to Simone Signoret, Jane Birkin, the Eagles or Jean Rochefort what proves a certain notoriety, one finds it only on his site except and I am categorical on the site of the INA PRO or one finds them well as well as others, but which requires a subscription to which I have access, but not accessible to the public free thus one cannot establish direct Web links on this Site. Note however that out of 41 sources there are only 7 that link to the artist's site. Of which 2 I am going to delete: n°2 (figaro) n°14(Japanese press ISSN 0911 3347) n°15 and16(concert programmes, maybe not necessary) n°18 (TV) 22 (US press) 31 (Film press) I deleted 15 and 16 which are only concert programmes but for one of them I found a programme archive site; there are only 5 sources left from the artist's site out of 41 for the time being So I am trying to improve little by little, you will give me your opinion and your advice. Thank you in advance. --AMPYTRION (talk) 17:27, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
--AMPYTRION (talk) 20:45, 21 September 2021 (UTC) Hello dear Hitro Milanese I hope you are well, I am coming back to you because I have made some changes in the direction of your advice, all the details are in my two previous messages, I would like to know if you were able to read them? best regards AMPYTRION (talk) 20:18, 17 October 2021 (UTC) AMPYTRION (talk) 20:24, 16 October 2021 (UTC) Draft:Uday Ali Pabrai[edit]hi Hitro Milanese, We were unaware of the Wiki’s terms and conditions and the privacy policy,Kindly guide us how to proceed further, is there a possibility to recover the same page or can we create as a new page. Thanks Syedshawar (talk) 04:14, 23 August 2021 (UTC)syed shawar
Draft: Janglinath Mahadev temple[edit]Please help me to make this draft in a complete artical Bygonetime (talk) 06:27, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
About Dasith Gamage's Article[edit]You have included the required reference number 4 for WP:MUSICBIO which was required for Dasith Gamage's draft article please feel free to review and publish this again. thank you! Draft link - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Dasith_Gamage
Regarding your statement[edit]Hello Hitro, hope you are great. on July 17, you made a statement that nothing much happened since last AFD, on page Draft:Raybak_Abdesselem two days ago that Athlete won a gold medal in 2021 European Youth Championships in Finland, he has been covered by lots of international media and I have updated few references, will you please take a look now? https://www.ffkarate.fr/championnats-deurope-jeunes-2021-un-second-titre-et-deux-medailles-dargent-pour-conclure/ https://www.karate-k.com/fr/sport/actus/928-tampere2021-abdesselem-et-hierso-en-or.html --Static Hash (talk) 15:15, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
please see this Sophia_Bouderbane --Static Hash (talk) 08:11, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
Recent rejection on Asit Pattnaik article[edit]Hi Hitro, I'm trying to publish my first article as you saw can you help me a little and guide me, exactly where I'm making a mistake, and hoe I can improve my article. [[ https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Asit_Pattnaik |Asit Pattnaik]]
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Jagtar Singh Manela[edit]Hi, I have create a page named "Jagtar Singh Manela" and its in talk right now, could you please help to approve it. New Page Patrol newsletter September 2021[edit]  Hello HitroMilanese, Please join this discussion - there is increase in the abuse of Wikipedia and its processes by POV pushers, Paid Editors, and by holders of various user rights including Autopatrolled. Even our review systems themselves at AfC and NPR have been infiltrated. The good news is that detection is improving, but the downside is that it creates the need for a huge clean up - which of course adds to backlogs. Copyright violations are also a serious issue. Most non-regular contributors do not understand why, and most of our Reviewers are not experts on copyright law - and can't be expected to be, but there is excellent, easy-to-follow advice on COPYVIO detection here. At the time of the last newsletter (#25, December 2020) the backlog was only just over 2,000 articles. New Page Review is an official system. It's the only firewall against the inclusion of new, improper pages. There are currently 706 New Page Reviewers plus a further 1,080 admins, but as much as nearly 90% of the patrolling is still being done by around only the 20 or so most regular patrollers. If you are no longer very active on Wikipedia or you no longer wish to be part of the New Page Reviewer user group, please consider asking any admin to remove you from the list. This will enable NPP to have a better overview of its performance and what improvements need to be made to the process or its software.  Various awards are due to be allocated by the end of the year and barnstars are overdue. If you would like to manage this, please let us know. Indeed, if you are interested in coordinating NPR, it does not involve much time and the tasks are described here. To opt-out of future mailings, please remove yourself here. Sent to 827 users. 04:31, 16 September 2021 (UTC) Draft:University of Michigan-Shanghai Jiao Tong University Joint Institute[edit]Hi, HitroMilanese. Thank you very much for reviewing my draft. I notice that my draft was rejected due to lack of reliable sources. Previously, I used only references from the Institute's website. Now that I have included more external sources, could you kindly take a look the updated version please? Many thanks in advance. Draft deletion[edit]Hello. Sorry for the random question but is there anyway to delete a draft? RayJstillhere (talk) 06:57, 22 September 2021 (UTC)
Draft:Sproutt[edit]I added a few more links I found to https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Sproutt, can you please let me know if these are relevant? To me, they look like they are from notable publications but I'm not that experienced here, so let me know - I'll still keep searching for better references. Thanks.
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Hello, i want help in publishing this article please i really need help with this. i really don't know what is missing on this article i need help. thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tomusange (talk • contribs) 11:24, 18 November 2021 (UTC) Harsh Gujral[edit]Hi, Thank you for reviewing my work on Harsh Gujral. You comment said that it does not meet WP:Entertainer. However I failed to understand what clause it does not meet. He is a comedian, has a huge fan base as well. Can you help me understand what clause it does not meet? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Saritasanghvi (talk • contribs) 08:54, 20 November 2021 (UTC)
Hey, Even if we disregard the huge fan base, Point no 1 says "Has had significant roles in multiple notable films, television shows, stage performances, or other productions" - So he has performed multiple stage performances across India and worldwide. is that not sufficient?
Request to express your thoughts at Nomination of Sadat Hossain for deletion[edit]If you are able to express your thoughts and regards again Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Sadat Hossain (3rd nomination) it will be helpful. He is famous and renowned writer in Bangladesh and IMDB listed Director. It is third time it nominated for deletetion. I think this is personal vendetta to delete this article. I hope you can review the article and give your opinion about keep or delete it. Jubair Sayeed Linas (talk) 15:36, 20 November 2021 (UTC) Recent Rejection of article on Andrew Frieder[edit]My apologies Hitro! I had not created a subject and believe I may have replied to a different post. I will resubmit my post here again.... Thank you Hitro Milanese for reviewing my first page submission. I am now working on adding more context as you had suggested, but am hoping that you can provide me with just a bit more specific direction? I have added an Infobox and have described more fully what Outsider Art is and how the artist, Andrew Frieder's work fits with that form of art, with citations from prominent national art magazines and organizations tying him to Ousider Art. I am now also creating a brief synopsis of his life history including a description of how his mental illness affected his life and his art. I do have some concerns about adding some of this information as the public sources one could cite have written some things that are incorrect. I am unsure of the best way to proceed in this area. I am hoping that these are some of the items that will add the context you had requested. If not, or if you can clarify, please let me know. Regards, MitchellMitchellfrieder (talk) 09:57, 21 November 2021 (UTC)
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Hello, HitroMilanese, I saw on Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/List of reviewers by subject that you are a AFC reviewer who has some knowledge of Islam. Could you look over this article? I believe the page creator says it passed AFC review but I find that doubtful. Thanks for any help you can offer. Liz Read! Talk! 02:27, 25 November 2021 (UTC)
Help[edit]My Submission has been declined. Please help me. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sundergnan (talk • contribs) 07:28, 25 November 2021 (UTC)
Bar Council of Rajasthan[edit]Hi Hitro. Thanks for your time and efforts in reviewing this article and helping me post in main space. Have a nice day. Gardenkur (talk) 11:02, 25 November 2021 (UTC) User:Sydneymathis/sandbox / Draft:Frank Rothman[edit]You declined this draft of an article Frank Rothman on the basis it did not show notability . But I think you may not have noticed that he was the subject of a full NYTimes obituary, and it has been consistently held in hundreds of afd discussions that this is sufficient evidence of notability to support an article: (there is a question that needs to be checked about the degree of possible copypaste). After this is checked, I will accept the article. I have also done what we usually do for any serious submission, moved it to the correct place, which is Draft:Frank Rothman DGG ( talk ) 02:11, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
Thank you for your feedback![edit]HitroMilanese, thank you for your speedy feedback. Much appreciated. I removed the IMDB reference/text, and added a newer reference that is 3rd party for the one film where that was applicable. Cheers! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Teaspoontornado (talk • contribs) 23:50, 28 November 2021 (UTC)
Alain Guélis[edit]Hello hitro milanese, I did not get any answer from you concerning the article on the composer Alain Guélis, I made a certain number of modifications in the direction of your recommendations; I would like to advance with your invaluable advice. Sincerely --AMPYTRION (talk) 21:22, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Hello Hitro Milanese, thanks for replying, so I'll try to submit my article, but what I'd really like to avoid is it being deleted altogether and having to start all over again, how do I get the draft back in that case? AMPYTRION (talk) 19:07, 17 December 2021 (UTC) HitroMilanese Please assist would be greatly appreciated[edit]Recently submitted an article about TCG World and was declined due to references. What do I need to do to get the article approved? Any advice would be greatly appreciated:) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Metaverse man (talk • contribs) 05:47, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
Draft Alain Guélis[edit]Hi Hitro Milanese, thanks for replying, so I'll try to submit my article, but what I'd really like to avoid is it being deleted altogether and having to start all over again, how do I get the draft back in that case? | |||||||||||
