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Congrats on uploading your info to the main page. Your content is very informative, and exceeds the previous information on education. The content you added was very well integrated into the previous content. I liked your intro and the history surrounding the change in education efforts in Camden. The updates you made regarding my last peer review showed vast improvement and helped your text flow properly. I look forward to reviewing the next subject area your currently working on.
This user is a student editor in Wikipedia:Wiki_Ed/Rutgers-Camden/Writing_Wikipedia_(Fall_2016). Student assignments should always be carried out using a course page set up by the instructor. It is usually best to develop assignments in your sandbox. After evaluation, the additions may go on to become a Wikipedia article or be published in an existing article. |