User:Ghalmars

Ghalmars, I think you did an awesome job and really contributed great information to this wikipedia topic. I see no grammatical or spelling errors in your section of the article. I like that you really cited your work and spoke facts rather than opinion. Great job! Oliviacharrington (talk) 05:07, 22 November 2013 (UTC)

Peer Response I have a few suggestions for your contribution. "During most interactions, others situate an actor’s sex by identifying their sex category however," I think it should be changed to, "During most interactions, others situate an actor's sex by identifying their sex category. However," to make your sentence flow better. Also I would suggest changing, "Originally written in 1977 but not published until 1987 “Doing Gender” is the most cited article published in Gender and Society." to "Originally written in 1977, but not published until 1987, "Doing Gender" is the most cited article published in Gender and Society." I enjoyed reading your contribution and think it will help Wikipedia users! (Jly16 (talk) 06:32, 22 November 2013 (UTC))