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Article: Bay of Pigs Invasion https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bay_of_Pigs_Invasion
My article regarding the bay of Pigs invasion displayed great examples of a well prepared wikipedia article that had in depth, unbiased historical information that was cited correctly. The article had other strengths as well such as incorporating numerous links to other articles and resources for the reader to be able to read relevant information that helped their understanding of the topic. The weaknesses that I would plan to edit are to incorporate a few more sentences in the section relating to the US government involvement in the Bay of Pigs invasion to help the reader understand more clearly why the US government decided to do what it did. In addition, I would also add a map of an aerial image of Cuba used by the CIA/Government during the planning of the Bay of Pigs invasion to provide the reader with a visual of the planning cycle that ensued before the invasion took place.