User:Dkheiry/sandbox
 | This is a user sandbox of Dkheiry. You can use it for testing or practicing edits. This is not the sandbox where you should draft your assigned article for a dashboard.wikiedu.org course. To find the right sandbox for your assignment, visit your Dashboard course page and follow the Sandbox Draft link for your assigned article in the My Articles section. |
Strengths
1. Used a great amount of reliable sources
2. Unbiased for the most part
3. Citations all included
4. Detailed information
Weaknesses
1. Article used two dead links
2. Awkward placements of irrelevant information.
3. Outdated information
I removed irrelevant content, such as "On April 26, 2016, it was announced that Nike would release the Nike Air Force 180 "Olympic" associated with the dream team of 1992.[1] It will drop on July 7 at select Nike Sportswear retailers.[1] " which was originally under the Finance tab.
I added an illustration of Bill Bowerman and Phil Knight because I was interested in what they looked like. I assumed that if I was interested, so are other people. The illustration is from a biography called "Building the Nike Empire" by Keith Elliot Greenberg. Illustration by Dick Smolinski.
Nike is involved in programs for the community, but no information was put into the page. I created a "Programs" tab. I added information about The Nike Community Ambassador Program. I also inserted it's citation.
I removed a dead link about the partnering of Nike with (RED) and updated the details with new information. I then created a new citation, linked to a different page.
The last noted brand worth of Nike was from 2014. I updated that information for Nike's 2017 value, and added a citation.
- ^ a b Low, Carver (April 26, 2016). "Nike brings back retro shoes". Hotnewhiphop. Retrieved April 26, 2016.