User:Cheeks9000

Bio

About me

My name is Brian Zizumbo and I spend most my time in the gym to improve my overall health. My main goals is to gain as much muscle and increase the amount I can lift. Going to the gym by itself will not help me reach my goals, but I would need to eat excessive amounts of protein, eat vegetables, eat lean meats and avoid eating junk food that would not benefit my growth. On my free time I either watch some anime or play videos games. My favorite anime that I've finished is attack titan. Another thing about me that makes me who I am would be my Hispanic parents. Their ideology is very different from the people in America because my parents grew up in a rural area of Mexico and are not in touch with americas cultural differences. Besides that fact, my parents make amazing Mexican dishes that bring a smile to my face.

My Wikipedia Interests

My interest in power lifting and body building would get me more into Wikipedia. If I were to work on it long term, I would love to write about the people involved in it and history of what's it become. Chris Bumstead and Larry wheels are good examples of who I would right about. Both don't have much info on Wikipedia or is not up to date.

Article evaluation

Im interested to learn more about the Wikipedia article on the NFL. As a child I loved watching the Seahawks play and still do. The NFL has lot's of information to go over for someone that knows little about the game or placements and I'm hoping that the Wikipedia article will provide that information for someone that is new to the sport or fan base. I visited the NFL article on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: It's complete, the article is up to date, and sources are not biased.

Complete

When reading the article, I was provided with enough information to know about how the NFL was structured. The Article's format is organized in headings and subheadings to individualize certain topics or information that the reader would need to know more about. The article also mentioned information about the Draft, Free agency, and season format which I thought was very important to write about in an article because without that information, new NFL fans would be confused on what they are watching and how the season would come to a close.

Up to date

The Citations that I've clicked on seemed to have been up to date. When looking at the revision history, the last time someone revised the article was October 11, 2022. The article also provided and image of Trevor Lawrence, which was drafted the Jaguars in 2021. When opening a citation, it brought me to a reliable source that is up to date and provided the same information that I was given in the Wikipedia article. Also, all the current coaches for each NFL team is listed which, could change every year.

Non Bias

The article did not seem to have any bias at all. It was straight forward and gave out hard facts. The NFL article had history and NFL teams that could have had a bias argument about whether the AFC or the NFC being the best In the league. Having any sort of bias in the article would just lead the reader to assume the wrong information and could have trouble in the future.

Conclusion

I would say this Wikipedia article is an excellent source. The NFL article has various of citations, good layout, up to date, proper grammar, and no bias. Having a complete article really gives out the correct information to the reader. All the citations and the article are up to date. Also,There are no biased claims. The NFL article would sure help out and is complete.