User:Catgarthley16113
Bio
[edit]About me
[edit]My name is Catlynn Garthley but I go by Cat for short. I am 21 year old Hispanic American. I was born in Paramount California but I lived in a military household so I moved around alot as a kid. I work full time at a Preschool and also attend school. I have a boyfriend of 3 years and 3 cats that we treat as our own children and spoil a lot. My interests are traveling, swimming, reading, learning history, hiking, and of course binge watching on Netflix. When COVID-19 spread throughout the world, millions of people sought comfort in Netflix as they sheltered at home[1]
My Wikipedia Interests
[edit]What Draws me to Wikipedia are mostly history facts, or research for school or just for fun. I'm not sure what things I'm going to do or would accomplish as a volunteer since I am very new to this.
Article Evaluation
[edit]Lake Stevens, Washington, is a beautiful city that is only growing bigger each day. My interest in the city is because it is where my grandparents live and where my mother and my boyfriend grew up, but I wanted to know more about Lake Stevens's history, so I decided to look at the people that founded the city. I visited the Rucker Brothers article, and I found three aspects of it worth commenting on: Whether each fact is cited with an appropriate and reliable source, whether the sections or sentences are irrelevant, and whether there are any grammatical errors or informal language.
Citations
[edit]As I reviewed the article to see if the facts in it were cited correctly with appropriate and reliable sources. I first read through the article and checked each citation noted to ensure it was correct and reliable. I found that all of the citations were very good and interesting, although there was one fact without a citation to support what was being said.
Irrelevance
After I reviewed this fascinating article, it could have been said that there were some sections in the article that did not have anything directly to do with the Rucker Brothers. Although the sentences built up an interesting background to what was going on during this historical time that indirectly impacted the Rucker Brothers while they were building their business, a quote of that is "Speculation in Everett was intense, and the new city was built quickly, but the boom turned to bust when it was announced that the Great Northern would establish its West Coast terminus at Seattle instead of Everett." (Wikipedia contributors).[2]
Grammar
[edit]At the end of reviewing the article, I decided to look at the grammar and to see if there were any grammatical errors. I found that there were 9 minor grammar mistakes, such as punctuations and capitalization. A word was used that did not have the correct verb tense; the example for this is "which was inspired by and memorializes Margaret Rucker" (Wikipedia contributors)[2]. The word memorializes should have been changed to past tense, memorialized.
Conclusion
[edit]In conclusion, after evaluating the article, I found it extremely interesting and informative about the history of the area that my family and boyfriend had grown up in. The citations were done well, with the exception of a citation that was needed but absent. I also found that there were not many irrelevant sections or sentences. Some did not have direct relevance to the Rucker Brothers but did help build up an interesting background to what was going on during this historical time that indirectly impacted the brothers and their business. I also only found a few grammatical errors, but the article was formal and well written.
References
[edit]- ^ Lee, Wendy (20 Oct 2020). "Netflix's subscriber growth slows as streaming competition rises". Los Angeles Times. Retrieved 10 Jan 2021.
{{cite web}}: CS1 maint: url-status (link) - ^ a b "Rucker Brothers". Wikiapedia. 02-2-2021. Retrieved 2-2-2021.
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