User:Carocasalduc
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3 potential articles:
1. I would like to edit the article video editing because it has always been a topic of my interest. This article needs more information to make it more inviting.
2. Another article I would like to edit is communication strategies. It doesn't explain in detail what communication strategies are. I believe I can find sources that could help this article be more informative.
3. When researching I found and article on Iphoneography and it seemed very interesting. I would like to improve this article by adding more information and more images as examples.
At first I was thinking article 2 would be a good idea, but when I clicked I found "Communication strategies in second-language acquisition" which seemed less promising as a topic. Perhaps you meant to link a different article? The iphoneography one seems OK. It seems like a neologism without much substance, however, there is info in our textbook related to Searching for Sugarman etc. that could pertain. You are welcome to move forward drafting the iphoneography article, if you want to switch to a different communication strategies article please email me. Also check the wiki markup cheatsheet on the back of the pamphlet handed out in class on formatting numbered lists Erickaakcire (talk) 19:13, 26 September 2016 (UTC)
Peer Edit:
I have reviewed your article and I think you listed a lot of helpful tips and tricks. I think maybe you should add a link when you say HDR. I am pretty sure there is a HDR wikipedia article. Also I would try to find a few sources that you could use to validate the tips some way. One last suggestion I have is to bold the Tips and Tricks title to add to the flow of the original wikipedia article. I hope I helped. JacobAM (talk) 11:06, 12 October 2016