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Article Evaluation
[edit]Ethiopian Airlines Flight 961
[edit]- Sense a little bit of plagiarism by rewording a few statements from air disaster.com directly into the article.
- Inconsistency in figures. Some of the websites are reporting 163 passengers while other websites are reporting 175 total passengers on board. The article summary and article lead also have different figures.
- Though may be relevant, i found creating a section of notable passengers disregards other passengers who lost their lives in the plane crash.
- Some of article sources are different pages from the same website e.g www.webcitation.org.(Reference to the same website) There is not a wide variety of sources.
- Some of the websites cited are irrelevant to the topic of discussion (https://www.webcitation.org/67uAO5RHu?url=http://www.flightglobal.com/news/articles/1996-spawns-worst-ever-accident-totals-1383/)
- Some of the links work but others do not load completely
- The talk pages are going on about different things. One major discussion is whether there should be more emphasis or a more detailed biography on the captain Leul Abate
- After the article was rated as a start by one of the wiki-projects it got an automatic assessment. The article is part of a couple of wiki-projects of which it got many C-class ratings..
- The article was informative though and it described well the airplane crash that happened.