User:Brybrydawg
Edit History
[edit]Most of these edits were small changes– more sources, minor details, some suggestions and minor grammatical corrections. An editor named Autarch made quite a few contributions recently, and the last edit made was on Feb. 8.
There were some major edits in content at the beginning of its history– it sounded like the original creator made it as a joke due to the number of mistakes, like referring to it as "star wars" instead of the "cola wars." More recently, in February, there have been a lot of reverted evidence and reports of "vandalism," which makes me a little nervous.
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[edit]Reasons for Improvement
[edit]This article has a lot of room for expansion and is relatively unbalanced. Adding a bit more information on the history of CocaCola and its advertising efforts would help match the information provided by Pepsi. It also needs both past and current examples of competition as well as success rates.
This article has a lot of information, which means there's a lot to edit and reorganize. It is written more as a narrative rather than with an encyclopedic tone typical of Wikipedia. There is also a lot of content in the "Talk" section that could aid in guiding my editing.
I like this article because it has a lot of information but lacks organization. I could easily move things around for coherency. It also appears to need help in sounding less neutral.
This article needs help largely in choosing which content to include and writing style.
This article needs to be reorganized and split up better.
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