User:Biancapalmer/sandbox
Critique of "Social photography" article:
- I would make the article more credible by editing the sources that were used to more up to date ones since the majority of the sources were old and/or led to broken links.
Edit of "Social photography" article:
- Added a new sentence to the last sentence of first paragraph that included a citation. Talked about how social photography is important nowadays and how it is used.
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