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Declined by KylieTastic 43 days ago. Last edited by KylieTastic 43 days ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Thomas Phenell Walker

Born May 20th,1976, and raised in Philadelphia Tommy has interviewed top A/B caliber Actors, Artists, Musicians, Rappers, and Comedians across all genres. An extraordinary husband, father, grandfather, and all-around individual. In 2022, a life-changing kidney transplant that sent his purpose into overdrive. Mr. Walker has made it one of his missions to ensure that through the success of his communication businesses the viewers and listeners alike will be able to benefit from not only entertainment but also the fight against cancer and the need for potential donors around the world.

Thomas Walker affectionately known by most as Tommy is the founder and CEO of Avision Entertainment and its subsidiaries in the USA and abroad. Truly remarkable, someone who has recently embarked on a profound journey of transformation and resilience. His vast growing media empire was founded while heroically battling end-stage renal failure.

A true American story built from a weekly radio broadcast in the heart of Philadelphia. Over the years Avision Entertainment is now reaching a toppling presence on multiple media streams of more than three hundred and fifty thousand listeners and an additional One Hundred Thousand plus online subscribers and followers.

References

2018-Old-school Hip Hop Concert.

2019-We lit in Atlantic City NJ Hip hop concert-

2019- Interviewing Hip hop artist O.C.

2022-Comedy Show in Philadelphia.

2022-The Legends of Motown concert